Reviews for Down By The Swimming Hole
Rusper chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
How on earth did I miss this the first time around! This story is fabulous! What makes it even better is that it's in my home state. Hee.

Please continue this story. It's begging for it. :B
goldentemptress chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
You two crack me the fuck up!

I was imagining Alice talking in an exaggerated southern accent while she was narrating the story...and Jasper with a bucket shirtless...m, what's not to like

Alice was a brazen hussy...she let jazzy touch the naughty parts, such a dirty girl!

You two suck, you cut out the good part, where is the sexin? Geesh, I read all that and only got the post coital freakout...my word...

Amazing story, had me giggling the whole time, even if you two were teases...:)