Reviews for The Shadow of the Other
Kimmytrainer chapter 1 . 4/15
Wow, that was intense. I really dislike Severus behaving so weakly, so I love that you made him his usual strong, snarky self in the end.
snape.rickman chapter 1 . 3/15
Awwww that was the cutest thing one the planet! I loved it!
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 1 . 3/9
I can't explain it, but this ending just makes me so, so nervous. On the surface everything looks perfect, but if there's any of that pure submissive, I'll-do-anything-to-please-you aditude left in there... Harry wanted Snape to be more open, which clearly happened, because I just can't see Snape being that open no matter how much he loves someone. More open, yes, but ... though maybe it has to do with how amazing Harry's actions are, but ... plus, what if that's what Harry wants to hear - that Snape will still be submissive to him in private and that this is a good thing? If that's the case, Harry could have done a good job preserving his personality but not his true feelings toward Harry ... which, of course, would have been changed by those few weeks. But still, those few weeks changed things so much? I don't know... very morally messy when you dig a little. Then again, even if Harry changed Snape's behavior towards him, it is much better than the alternative.
Sorry for the mess of thoughts. Just thought I'd let you know my thoughts. Cheers :)
Barbara Vitoria chapter 1 . 2/28
Já li ao longo de minha vida algumas fanfics onde Severus é um High Elves, mas nunca uma oneshot tão precisa como essa. Adorei a forma como você escreveu tudo isso. Como Harry se martirizou tantas vezes, como Severus não queria fazer isso ao garoto e como Albus intrometeu-se em tudo. Foi bonito como Severus teve suas orelhas modificadas, como ficou apaixonado por Harry. Ah foi tão lindo u.u
Jen chapter 1 . 2/9
Thanks!
graceandpipp chapter 1 . 2/8
I do have to say that I really enjoyed reading this. I even stayed up really late to read the whole thing, I just could not bring myself to stop. :D :D
Hime-chan Natsumi chapter 1 . 1/24
Wow, yo lo ame! Realmente lo ame! De hecho tanto lo ame, que estoy segura que una parte de mi corazn ahora te ama. Esto de los altos elfos, es un tema que poco sabía. Y acabo de conocer. Pero ya los amo. Creo que Sev le queda mas que ser vampiro. Realmente lo ame. Ver a Sev tan sumiso y lindo. Y casi odio a Harry por su semana de indesición. Y a ese estupido estudiante por decir cosas tan terribles, casi perdemos a nuestro amoroso y tierno Severus. Luego, la culpa de Harry me hizo desesperada, creeme. Entre en los nervios de no saber que era lo vorrecto. Pues pense que egoistamente, mientras Sev perteneciera a Harry, la forma que lo hiciera, no seria problema. Y no pense que Dumbledore, no prnse que se preocupara tanto por Sev. Es que, siempre he tenido una mala imagen de este. Y mira que enojarse con su niño de oro, si que es un cambio sorpresivo. Insisto, pobre Severus. Pero ame cada pedazo de él. Así como su auto sarcastico. Pero ver que Sev, realmente quería a Harry, que realmente quería todo lo que sucedio. Me alivio en gran manera. Hahaha, despertar con una buena mamada, de tu adorable elfo. Vaya que es un sueño hecho realidad, no culpo a Harry por sus pensamientos posesivos y egoistas. Sabes agradezco mucho, que publicaras esta hermoaa historia. Con esta interesante tematica. Amo ver a Severus sumiso. Pero me gustaria que la explotaras mas, eso de los altos elgos y la relacion con Harry. Me sorprende que al final recuperara su personalidad, y que quedara tan bieny apropiada. Por eso te pido que consideres escribir mqs Snarry con la tematica de altos elfos. Con un Severus como sumiso. Creo que hay poco de ellos en el fandom. Y poco de Sev sumiso. Me gustaria ver mas. Por favor!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6
Nice, I found myself cheering and rejoicing like an idiot once the bonding was complete and Severus obtained his personality. Good story and can't get over poor Severus' reaction to the nose dive on the broom. But Elf!Snape with pointy ears, yum
alinefgs chapter 1 . 11/19/2016
Adorei essa oneshot seria bom se tivesse uma continuação né bjs
1414artemis14 chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
Aww that was awesome great job
Eden Areru chapter 1 . 8/10/2016
I really adore this story. I keep coming back to read it over and over again. Simply beautiful!
nini3773 chapter 1 . 8/7/2016
Absolutely lovingly beautiful! Bravo! A must read and keeper! And that last exchange spoken was awesome.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2016
Amazing job! This was brilliant! Thanks for sharing! I love every bit of it!
pupzpride chapter 1 . 7/7/2016
This is an amazing story. I felt for Harry and loved how it ended.
Nellie Rice chapter 1 . 7/2/2016
I loved this story it was amazing. Especially the ending wow the feels are strong.
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