Reviews for The Shadow of the Other
babiluv22 chapter 1 . 2/2/2018
Yay love love loved it
Lia Valentine chapter 1 . 1/4/2018
I have read and re-read this story multiple times and love it each time. It's one I go to when in need of a well rounded and well written story
Gambito chapter 1 . 8/31/2017
This was such a beautiful piece, thank you for writing it, I really enjoyed reading it.
DragonsDreamer chapter 1 . 6/13/2017
That was a awesome story. So well done and written. Good work.
Jissy2013 chapter 1 . 5/1/2017
love it
Kimmytrainer chapter 1 . 4/15/2017
Wow, that was intense. I really dislike Severus behaving so weakly, so I love that you made him his usual strong, snarky self in the end.
snape.rickman chapter 1 . 3/15/2017
Awwww that was the cutest thing one the planet! I loved it!
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 1 . 3/9/2017
I can't explain it, but this ending just makes me so, so nervous. On the surface everything looks perfect, but if there's any of that pure submissive, I'll-do-anything-to-please-you aditude left in there... Harry wanted Snape to be more open, which clearly happened, because I just can't see Snape being that open no matter how much he loves someone. More open, yes, but ... though maybe it has to do with how amazing Harry's actions are, but ... plus, what if that's what Harry wants to hear - that Snape will still be submissive to him in private and that this is a good thing? If that's the case, Harry could have done a good job preserving his personality but not his true feelings toward Harry ... which, of course, would have been changed by those few weeks. But still, those few weeks changed things so much? I don't know... very morally messy when you dig a little. Then again, even if Harry changed Snape's behavior towards him, it is much better than the alternative.
Sorry for the mess of thoughts. Just thought I'd let you know my thoughts. Cheers :)
barbaravitoriatp chapter 1 . 2/28/2017
Já li ao longo de minha vida algumas fanfics onde Severus é um High Elves, mas nunca uma oneshot tão precisa como essa. Adorei a forma como você escreveu tudo isso. Como Harry se martirizou tantas vezes, como Severus não queria fazer isso ao garoto e como Albus intrometeu-se em tudo. Foi bonito como Severus teve suas orelhas modificadas, como ficou apaixonado por Harry. Ah foi tão lindo u.u
Jen chapter 1 . 2/9/2017
Thanks!
graceandpipp chapter 1 . 2/8/2017
I do have to say that I really enjoyed reading this. I even stayed up really late to read the whole thing, I just could not bring myself to stop. :D :D
Hime-chan Natsumi chapter 1 . 1/24/2017
Wow, yo lo ame! Realmente lo ame! De hecho tanto lo ame, que estoy segura que una parte de mi corazn ahora te ama. Esto de los altos elfos, es un tema que poco sabía. Y acabo de conocer. Pero ya los amo. Creo que Sev le queda mas que ser vampiro. Realmente lo ame. Ver a Sev tan sumiso y lindo. Y casi odio a Harry por su semana de indesición. Y a ese estupido estudiante por decir cosas tan terribles, casi perdemos a nuestro amoroso y tierno Severus. Luego, la culpa de Harry me hizo desesperada, creeme. Entre en los nervios de no saber que era lo vorrecto. Pues pense que egoistamente, mientras Sev perteneciera a Harry, la forma que lo hiciera, no seria problema. Y no pense que Dumbledore, no prnse que se preocupara tanto por Sev. Es que, siempre he tenido una mala imagen de este. Y mira que enojarse con su niño de oro, si que es un cambio sorpresivo. Insisto, pobre Severus. Pero ame cada pedazo de él. Así como su auto sarcastico. Pero ver que Sev, realmente quería a Harry, que realmente quería todo lo que sucedio. Me alivio en gran manera. Hahaha, despertar con una buena mamada, de tu adorable elfo. Vaya que es un sueño hecho realidad, no culpo a Harry por sus pensamientos posesivos y egoistas. Sabes agradezco mucho, que publicaras esta hermoaa historia. Con esta interesante tematica. Amo ver a Severus sumiso. Pero me gustaria que la explotaras mas, eso de los altos elgos y la relacion con Harry. Me sorprende que al final recuperara su personalidad, y que quedara tan bieny apropiada. Por eso te pido que consideres escribir mqs Snarry con la tematica de altos elfos. Con un Severus como sumiso. Creo que hay poco de ellos en el fandom. Y poco de Sev sumiso. Me gustaria ver mas. Por favor!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2017
Nice, I found myself cheering and rejoicing like an idiot once the bonding was complete and Severus obtained his personality. Good story and can't get over poor Severus' reaction to the nose dive on the broom. But Elf!Snape with pointy ears, yum
alinefgs chapter 1 . 11/19/2016
Adorei essa oneshot seria bom se tivesse uma continuação né bjs
1414artemis14 chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
Aww that was awesome great job
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