Reviews for Inner Death
Bookworm chapter 5 . 11/1
This was really good, the way you described the emotions, I actually teared up at the end and I don't do that often. As feedback, I think you could've drawn it out a little more, but it's really good as it is.
Maria de Sanctos chapter 5 . 9/26
I just had to leave a comment and say I loved your rant. :) Except for the swearing, but the content was amazing and SOOOO true! Thanks for speaking the truth!

God Bless!
FieryQueenOfAllSharpObjects chapter 5 . 7/29
I absolutely loved this! You did a great job with this! Qui-Gon did seem a bit harsher but it fit in well with this fanfiction; again, very good job.
WinchesterNimrod chapter 1 . 3/14
*sings* Don't go breaking my heart...BECAUSE RIGHT NOW MY FEELS ARE TOO STRONG!
Stormcutter684 chapter 5 . 12/15/2014
Awwww - wonderful story! So much Obi and Qui angst, and Obi whump, and emotions and mental pain ... But then love and comfort, warmth and care, it's beautiful! 3
ScotBossIsFangirling chapter 5 . 11/26/2014
That was an awesome story!
Guest chapter 5 . 9/27/2014
This is the most amazing story ever!
Guest chapter 2 . 9/27/2014
Love it!
Aviendha91 chapter 5 . 8/7/2014
Liked the story! New to Star Wars fan fiction, but already liking the good Obi-angst and Qui-Gon comfort.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
I'm sorry, I love your writing, I read a bunch of your stuff, but could you please put up a trigger warning for self harm? I know you said it was intense, but SH specific? I'm trying to recover but I got really really triggered when you described it and felt like it was slightly romanticized. Thank you for your understanding, and I SWEAR, it's nothing about you, your writing's brilliant.
Kenobi's Legacy chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
I was just browsing fanfiction looking for good stories and when I found this one I couldn't put the phone down and I finally finished reading this at like 1 in the morning. In short I loved your story
Scarlet01754 chapter 5 . 8/28/2013
Great story really captured teenage angst
Rumbleroar'sSlumberingCubs chapter 5 . 7/1/2013
This story was amazing! I cried so many times! Ans it was ao accurate in how Obi Wan was feeling and how Qui Gon reacted! I adore this story!
jack-damian chapter 5 . 1/1/2013
the tears nearly came! only my vast self-control prevented the fuzziness of your AMAZING mush scene from causing a flood in my bedroom. cuteness in story form!
Edna Pests chapter 5 . 8/16/2012
Just reread this, after spending some time hunting it down because I craved it, like chocolate. I don't know how you do it, but you describe depression so well that it brought me straight in the middle of it. Not every writer can make you feel a character's emotion that well. And you wrote some truly great hugs. Due to description, or placing, or whatever they brought sweet bursts of warmth to my chest. Well done! I suggest this song for the "credits" to this story. watch?vM3JylvQxx60
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