|Reviews for Ivory Deceptions|
| Flightfoot chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
This was pretty funny, though somehow, I don't think that Iori would actually react like that. Iori is really mature for his age.
| Nietzsche's Itch chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
How did you think of this? I mean really. It's GENIUS! Just great :)
| Permanent chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
Aw, that's seriously adorable.
| Clzh and Clzh-x chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
*Laughter* Brilliant! Sheer brilliance!
Very good portrayal of the characters. We're so glad you took up writing.
Favorite part: Daisuke sneezing. (Provided of course, if you wrote that with the little Japanese culture-stigma, for lack of a better term, in mind).
| Fizzing Wizard chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
Aw, that was so cute! I loved Daisuke playing chauffeur and taking Iori all over town to find Jou. It was also nice to see Iori act like a kid. He's so often mature, but he *is* only nine years old, and fighting the Kaiser would stress anyone out. His reaction to his tooth falling out was SO cute.
LOL at Hikari. I want to know who she was talking about. The irony is, I thought that little bit was very IC for 02 Hikari. She really was way more of a typical 10-year-old girl than in season 01.
And LOL at Takeru! Good thought process, not so good idea. And then he ends up "muttering unmentionables" about the Tailmon. Hehe. My mental image was of panties dropping out of his mouth. XD He probably feels that way...
It was also perfectly in character for Iori to prefer Jou over Taichi (or even Daisuke and Takeru) for reassurance/tooth replacement. He's both a doctor's kid as well as the original owner of the Reliability crest. I don't know if this fic takes place before or after Iori gets the Reliability egg, but even if he doesn't have it yet, he and Jou have similar temperaments and Iori definitely seems to trust him a lot.
| SugarSpiral chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
, V cute there Benign!
I love how Iori refuses to listen to Daisuke... Cruel, but true.
I want to know what Hikari and Mimi were talking about though!
, 2 is one of my favourite numbers, didcha know?
| Potgenie chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
Oops! *adds you to author alert*
It never occurred to me that Iori was at the age where he was still losing baby teeth! He's so... young! *cries*
That kid is just too gullible! Geez!
I can't believe Iori doesn't know about the whole tooth thing... he's like nine! LOL!
I like Daisuke in this one!
Oh, and nice title! Thanks so much for the dedication... though I'm not to sure about the title! ;)
| Circeus chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Aw... Poor Iori needs to work on his gullibility. That was a neat bit of psychological warfare on the Kaiser's part, though.
| PrincessJaded chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
So Iori thinks he's falling apart? Huh... that's kinda funny.
*Giggle* at Iori’s tears were near returning. “It’s because he knows I’m falling apart and he doesn’t want to break the news to me.”
How come you can make Hikari girly but not Man-chan?
Well it was cutesy. So mission accomplished.
Thanks for the dedication... *scowls at the title before my name*
| maidenheart chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Hm, weird. I was 6 and the only one in my class who didn't lose a single tooth. Within 3 months I had lost two.
This chapter was hilarious in its own twisted way...xD