|Reviews for Laughter|
| guest chapter 1 . 1/7
While interesting I very much doubt Kakashi cares at all what Hiashi thinks of him let alone is scared of the guy.
| Crystal M. Key chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
That was amusing. Thanks! Favorite bit:
Hanabi felt lucky for whoever Hinata married, for he was lucky indeed. As long as he met her criteria, if not, then he would be in a lot of pain.
| ElementKitsune chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
This was funny.
I like how Hanabi resolved to tell Hiashi, but backed out and unintentionally sent Hinata and Neji into a laughing fit.
| BundleofContradictions chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
Heh. I laughed, too when I read that part in Paperwork. Hanabi is likely a spoiled little brat and deserved it, but it's nice to read your fic and see:
A. A bonding moment btw. Sisters;
B. Both Hinata and Neji got a good laugh out of it
C. Neji was able to make Kakashi go pale! Hee!
Random Hyuga thoughts:
Everytime I read a fanfic with a Hyuga, their eyes are described with a different color. Light blue, lavender, white...maybe they just got the type of eyes that changes color with their moods? (For the record, I think their eyes look light lavender in the anime).
Am I the only one who thinks of Neji and Hinata as genetically half-siblings rather than cousins because their fathers were identical twins? (Identical twins are nature's clones, sharing the same DNA.) If it weren't for that, I'd ship 'em. I got no problems with regular first cousins marrying, and it would be a newt way to solve the Hyuga succession problem. Also, the characters could balance each other out. But genetically, they're just too close for comfort. Oh, well.
Kudos on the fic!
| Taryn Streambattle chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
| Dinesha chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
lol...that was good..._
| kaear chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
Cute little tidbit. Thank you for sharing.
| WhyMustIWrite chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
Ah! I had NO idea that you had written this fic already! You should have sent me a PM! I had tried to check earlier, but...did you change your name...because I couldn't find you.
Anyway, this was a delightfully fun fic. I enjoyed how Hanabi confided in her sister, only to have Neji overhear and tease her.
I also liked how you hinted at Hanabi's sadness at having Iruka gone.
Of course, my favorite line had to be Kakashi's answer to Hinata's inquiry: "Horrible. Hanabi is, with all due respect and to put it bluntly, a monster. I don't see how you put up with her, unless she acts differently at home."
LOL Kakashi does not have much teacherly tact.
I'll post a link to this story on my profile, so that readers of "Not Over..." will know that it's here. This was a funny sidefic, and I'm glad you undertook it!
| kathywolf chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
it's really funny i loved it. i say keep on going! i want to read the rest