|Reviews for Mortal Gods|
| S2 Intelligence chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
Is there...a chance for this to be updated?
| littlelightups chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Awww, that is soooo sad. a lot of detail, made me cry. :(
| The Nemean Lion chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
very good plz continue
| Regin chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!
| AngeliqueOleander69 chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
aww is so sad but i loves it! great job!
| en extase chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Really nice work. I especially enjoyed the reference to the Titans of mythology.
He had lost control.
I liked that one-liner.
The only thing that felt irksome was the opening paragraphs on the subject of the mysterious 'it'. It felt too belabored, with too much 'It was...'es. Being more salient there would have benefited the story.
| Paosheep chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Yes, very good.
| knight of the forgotton chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
Q,Q very sad,very good to im gonna go cry now.
| Latezz123 chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
Aw. Too bad it's a one-shot, you ended it already. That was a very good angst you wrote here.