Reviews for Those Three Words
Vani88 chapter 4 . 6/24/2009
Wow... I must say this is a really good chapter... very good, one gets the idea of the events, but you dont draw them out... which is great :) I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter :)
STLFAN chapter 4 . 6/20/2009
Wonder who this guy is? Looking forward to your next installment to answer some questions.
finlaure chapter 3 . 6/8/2009
More Please Soon This is really good.
Vani88 chapter 3 . 5/29/2009
Hm... I think you're slowly getting into the story.. :) You should make the chapters longer, and perhaps not switch POV so much... but it is really a good begining, and I would like to read more... Have you already written the whole story or are you writing it as you go ?
STLFAN chapter 3 . 5/27/2009
Oh this chapter was way too short! Please update soon.
it's a you chapter 3 . 5/26/2009
cool chapter, kinda short but still good. at “Boss we got a parcel foot print right here behind the sofa and I don’t think its Abby’s it’s to big,” i think you mean partial... not totally sure though
it's a you chapter 2 . 5/21/2009
cool story, anddid he say the "my abby" out loud?
STLFAN chapter 2 . 5/12/2009
Nice chapter. Keep them coming.
random-lobster chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
This is really good! Please write more!
STLFAN chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Your first fic - congratulations. Good start. Your writing is smooth, well written, easy flow. Minor typos. No big deal. Looking forward to more from you. It's a Gabby fic, so you will have plenty of readers.
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