|Reviews for The Kitsune and the Bat Girl|
| wnaruto616 chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
this story feels uncompleted to me i would like to read more of them
| MizoreShirayukiFan chapter 2 . 8/3/2013
nice of you to turn it into a multi-chapter, its a good start
| 14HaLfBeAsT14 chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
Man.. no matter what crossover it is you make it seem so cool.. Thank you for your great stories..
| Seer of Chaos17 chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
| fire assasin chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
dude this is one of the most wicked stories i have ever read.i mean, come on, is it really possible to get an animal pregnant w/ a different species. then again, naruto is part fox thnks to the kyubi, so it migt be natral. bu all in all, this is one HELL of a story.
p.s. could you try one w/ naruto in fox form so it can make sense next time.
| Elecman99 chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
It's not that your story is bad, or your writing, it's just the fact that you made a HUMAN have SEX with a BAT! WHAT'S WRONG WITH THAT PICTURE! I don't care that she's an antrhopomorphic bat, SHE'S STILL A FUCKING BAT! I always knew something was wrong with... DAMN! Also, How does a BAT get PREGNANT off of HUMAN SPERM? Also if she did, Why is the child not some fucked up abomination sin against GOD?
(Okay in all seriousness, Not a bad story, but the love interest was just well... kind of fucked up. otherwise, not a bad job.)
| Outkast000 chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
| Ryan L. Spradling chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
Well see if you can do 1 shots of each of the Sailor Scouts while you're at it. Very nice job as always.