Reviews for Out of the Game
Convenient Alias chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
Poor little Miura. Never had a chance at Nao-although I don't think she and Akiyama are really dating, they are still too close for her too really get close to anyone else in the same way, through the Liar Game at least.
bluejamist chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
I love this! Well-written and uber cute. I always love seeing Akiyama and Nao's relationship from the perspective of the other characters. Thank you!
heylalaa chapter 1 . 1/10/2012

this story is just so cute - especially the part where nao kept talking about akiyama. lol. all the characters are so in-character too! nice story :)
anapauril chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
Great ending! Rather nice to see nao & akiyama relationship from a third character's perspective. Somehow I get very contented after reading stories like this, still in line with the original manga/drama characters' personalities & believable. I can literally imagine the scenes happening in my mind as I read it. ] Thanks a lot for the story - literally made me smile ear to ear!
CYLi chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Very well written. I like how you portrayed Nao/Akiyama's relationship through Miura's pov. Excellent.
ButtButtDoodle chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Awww, this was so cute!

I actually liked Miura, and after he was eliminated I always wondered what his reaction would be to Nao's never-ending kindness. This was, in short, PERFECT. The characters were believable, their reactions were true to the manga, and I loved their dialogue. This is almost like a missing piece of the manga that was never revealed, I loved it! Kudos and thanks for sharing in the Miura love!3
IrisWill chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Aaaaw, poor Miura-san...I'd always thought that the drama didn't do him enough credit, even lumping him together with that Akagi-wimp as character...grrr.

I liked your story though! A little light-heartedness before my bedtime is nice, and yay for bringing back to my memory his nose-ring! _
hungrytiger11 chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Ah, poor Miura!
Tomas the Betrayer chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Great bit of writing you have here. The dual meaning came off perfectly, we really enjoyed it. Actually, Miura was my favorite non-essential character in the first Revival Round. Tomas appreciates kindness and compassion, especially coming from a guy you'd normally avoid if you saw him walking down the street. It would be only natural for our little punk-rocker to develop a crush on the girl who yanked his cahonies out of the fire. Thank you for writing this sweet, sad but most welcome addition to their characters. This is what fan fiction is all about! Pleasant dreams.
Meowmie chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
saltyavocado chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
"He was out of the game."

Epic win of a parting line!
soulbound nun chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
i really, really, REALLY loved this. i'm so glad somebody had miura-san in a fanficcy too! this was really good and true to the characters.

if you write more LG fanficcys (or any other series' that i know), i'll be sure to look forward to it. :3

- SbN
Nhe-Nhe-Nhe chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Nya 3

Super und it)
CherryFlamingo chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
Nice pun! Love the scene at the last part.

Miura's not so bad of a guy.
PersonalLegend chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
A very interesting perspective on Nao and Akiyama's relationship. Adding it to my favourites!
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