|Reviews for This Is Home|
| thatamateurwriter chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
This is so cute:3 I want to make a series out of this, but only with your permission. Can I? :)
| Misty Blue chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Awww, so sweet . . . and super funny, too! Their remarks to each other... Sibling bonding fluff full of surprises? The best ever! Awesome, cute, wonderful fic! Love it!
| jn208505 chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
Loved this! So sweet! Great work! :)
| Lucy Helen Ycul chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
I really love this story. Whenever I read it I can imagine Lucy's room the way I envision it. This is a very well written and I like how Lucy gets to move in with her brothers. Really good job!
| Elizabeth Gamgee chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
this was a good story except i don't really like that you made Lucy talk like that she would never talk like that her character is sweet kind and polite and she was not sweet kind and polite in this but is was very well written i love the relationship between Lucy and her brothers
| Team1DUnionJcat chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
Loved It! :D
| josie823 chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Ughhh! This one is perfect! Sequel!
| FelipeMarcusThomas chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
I loved the humour, very nicely done.
| Taryn Streambattle chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Beautiful! Well done!
| Annie Featherpen chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
Hello, Narnian Nights,
I found this story very funny and cute. These three are also my favorite Pevensies, and Id like to thank you for writing about them.
I really liked the fun banter between the siblings, and I thought it was really sweet of the Pevensie boys to have that room for Lucy. Its so like them to do something that sweet! :D
The only small suggestions I would have is the part about Peter and Edmund being gay; back then, gay was mostly used to describe happiness. Maybe replacing the word 'gay' with 'homosexual' would adhere to the times a little more. Thats really it, and you dont really have to change it, its just me being a word freak. :P
Other than that, this was really entertaining and warming to read, and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you.
- Annie Featherpen
| GeoffreyF chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
First of all, I love the idea here. It's a very lovely thing for Peter and Edmund to do, and all three Pevensies are nicely in-character. I also enjoyed the little pokes at certain types of fanfiction that we all wish would go away and ... well, you know. The particular reference to slash was brave (although perhaps a little strident; but that could be my lefty instincts coming out). :)
There were some very funny moments here, too ("What's wrong with Peter?" "Not my type"). A few little spelling mistakes ("weird", "regrettably") but nothing too glaring. The only punctuation issue was at the end of speech; don't forget commas. For example: "It doesn't," Lucy agreed. Rather than a full stop.
Overall, this was very sweet. Well done!
| Becca962 chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
This is so sweet! Great job.
| Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
This is so beautiful! Wow!
I did recognize the Last Battle references (which is SO sad, by the way); they made the story's plot AMAZING! *U*
I LOVE the bond Lucy, Edmund, and Peter share through Narnia; I'm just SO mad and sad that Susan is being so mean and stupid about everything! T.T _
Rock on! This was SO GORGEOUS! U *U*
Ever-so sincerely signed,
Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)
| churros-theultimatefandom chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
So cute! A few grammatical errors,
and I would have liked to see some more
descriptions, but I can almost let that
go with how cute it was. I love sibling
bonding fics with these guys! When I
finished reading it, I let out some noise
that sounded like a bike horn, but I really
meant to go aw.
| vrangr chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
(*plays panpipes to lull them to sleep*)