|Reviews for Stolen HeART|
| MommaAbby chapter 25 . 11/29/2011
Wow. It was such an amazing story. I loved how love truly conquered all; that Edward realized that despite his anger towards her deceit, at the end of the day he simply could not live without her in his life. So he sought out to forgive her. And at the end of the day, isn't that what love and relationship is all about? We often hurt and are hurt by the ones we love the most because we open ourselves to them completely. In turn it's up to us to forgive and seek forgiveness in order for our relationship to continue to grow and flourish. Beautiful story.
It would be cool to read some futuretakes. I would love to read about how Edward handles becoming part of the gang. I always knew that he would eventually join Bella and the gang in some sort of heist-I think with his success in his businesses and love of acquiring pieces of art through auctions-it's just a small push towards joining Bella. Maybe you did write them-I haven't stalked your stories yet since I have just discovered you (and I am so happy to have stumbled upon you!). Anyway, I look forward to reading more of your work!
| MommaAbby chapter 5 . 11/29/2011
hmmmmm the plot thickens...will she be able to resist dear Edward? Hell I know I'd have a hard time saying no! )
| MommaAbby chapter 2 . 11/29/2011
Damn, Bella is a bad ass...she makes being an art thief sound so sexy and high tech! For some odd reason it made me think of Catherine Zeta-Jones and that movie she starred in as an art theft-she was a sexy bad ass too!
| MommaAbby chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
At first I was confused as to who the woman is in this chapter. After all, we know Bella as either Isabella, Bella or Marie. Maria is a name I never associated with her, so I was mentally scratching my head thinking, "hmm I thought this was a B/E story?" But, as I continued to read, I realized that it was the name your character decided to go by, maybe to get as far away from "Bella" as she can? Hmm...all I know is I am hooked. It's always an adventure looking for completed stories that can get me hooked on the first chapter. I can't wait to continue reading this!
| MsLiss chapter 25 . 11/27/2011
i enjoyed your story, thanks for a great read
There are some grammer issues to correct but i was able to enjoy it regardless
| MsLiss chapter 19 . 11/27/2011
She is unbelievably callous.
| MsLiss chapter 18 . 11/27/2011
They are a manipulative lot arent they.
God if only they let Bella know they want her to have a chance with Edward- un hello Charlie wtf?
| sarahlouise80 chapter 25 . 9/28/2011
fantastic they got back together and charlotte sounds so ending.
| mcanary chapter 25 . 7/8/2011
This has been a great story to read, i have enjoyed each and every chapter and it kills me that i've waited this long to read it. It has been sitting in my favorites in IE and have passed it by many times to read something else due to the fact i wasn't sure about it. But to my dismay, i should have read it a long time ago...lol. You do write so very well and are able to capture the essence of the characters. Great job on a wonderful story and thanks for sharing.
| Twilight-boo chapter 25 . 4/7/2011
Omg I am finished and I loved it sooooo much. I think this story should have gotten way more reviews.
| KimiD chapter 4 . 12/16/2010
A bit of a cliffie... What does he know, earlier he had said something to Mike that made me think that too. Like Edward knew that Bella knew about Jess when he was talking about the flowers. He has to have had his own survellience equipment set up in his house with all that artwork there... wouldn't he have seen Emmett in the house? setting the bugs or something. My mind is whirling trying to figure it out. Then there at the end Bella is wondering if "he Knows" her plan... Mystries are flying...
| KimiD chapter 3 . 12/16/2010
Wow, another twist... Edward & Mike friends? Tanya married to Mike? Wow, you really are shakin' things up, gotta love it. Keeps me smiling wondering what you'll be up to next...
Alica & Jasper together, good! Rosalie & Bella, friends? I likes... Wow what an education she got, how did Charlie get started in that to start with, my head is spinning, this is sooo COOL, FUN Different, gotta love Different. LOL
| KimiD chapter 2 . 12/16/2010
I am so intrigued... I love the characters you have created from our regulars and it has not gone unnoticed that everyone is with "Maria" and Edward is the odd man out... Very cool! Not like so many stories where everyone is with him and Bella is the odd "man" out. Different and refreshing, like I said, this is gonna be fun! KimiD
| KimiD chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
Wow, talk about some OOCs... THis is a really fun story! I love the "foreplay" with Masen at the party, oh he is very intrigued with "Maria". This is going to get interesting, it's twisty, curving, shakeup flighty flirting. I am SOOO gonna love this adventure. KimiD
| anichick23 chapter 25 . 11/27/2010
Let me make this clear...It took me two days to finish the entire story! Not doing any homework like i planned, lack of sleep, and lack of reading anything else BUT this. So let me tell you that it was TOTALLY WORTH IT! XD
I enjoyed your story was sooooo good, I'm actually trying to use proper grammar to praise your talents!
Bella was saucy and feisty, when she wasn't crying she was kicking ass and bringing in her attitude! I loved everything about her!
Edward was flirty and charming, he had his flaws like everyone else but he was enjoyable.
I loved everyone, except Aro...and Jacob...
In all of the fanfiction community, this story is one of my top favorites.
While reading this it makes me question, did you ever planned a heist or are you just that of an awesome writer to come up with that plan? Either way, it was kick ass how you wrote the heist.
You made all of the characters believable and I felt it.
I enjoyed every minute of this and you should be proud of yourself.