Reviews for Broken: The Melodious Diviner
OrgasmicYaoi chapter 4 . 4/18/2011
My only complaint is the smut between axel ans Luna *shudders*

Its not right i'm sorry *cries* What would Demyx say to that anyways *narrows eyes*
ShivaTheDestroyer chapter 4 . 7/29/2010
Like the story but that was a little weird with luna and axel...But, will keep reading
Sergeant LemoOoN chapter 4 . 6/17/2010
The start was very nice :) happy family

then it started getting odd... I mean, Luna is a minor and Axel must be about...27...? by this time in the fic :s you might want to change Luna's age a wee bit...as someone mightreport this...

Also, your writing is very good but the POV change were sometimes a bit strange and kinda hard to follow...

Sorry, I'm not meaning to sound critical :) I did enjoy your story

xxx
Melody123 chapter 4 . 6/6/2010
Hmm let's see- loved the first 3 chapters. Cute plotline and good writing and I was really enjoying the story. It was very sweet how Axel and Roxas helped! The only thing that I hated, was the last chapter and that is because I hate shouta, not because of your writing or anything! I just didn't like how Axel cheated especially since he and Roxas had been paired for the entire fic then suddenly with a ten year old boy... Anyway good job!

Melody
Nitedream chapter 4 . 5/26/2010
Dude, why the hell is Axel a freakin' pedophile? o.o That's disturbing, but still kinda hot...yes I'm aware I'm a freak of nature for saying that .
Nightmother chapter 4 . 5/2/2010
oh dear... oh deary me...things are going to get messy
Brinkmess chapter 4 . 9/26/2009
This was sweet. i really liked the Saix/Lua scene. Made me feel...Well; it made me rethink about a certain story I was writing. Got me all chocked up in the inside...

I'm going to be honest...I was not expecting shotacon. I get the whole saix/Axel thing and therefore the whole Axel/Luns thing would make sense...but I was still a tiny bit surprised.

Really happy you updated though. You gonna exlpain how Saix found his way home?
CBDemyx chapter 4 . 9/24/2009
-*is speechless*- I literally cannot think of a coherent thought about this xD I mean really, it's just blank up n my head cause 1) For being with someone that young, that was really hot 2) Holy crap that was hot 3) Oh my god THAT WAS SO FUCKING HOT and 4) THAT WAS WELL WRITTEN AND SO FUCKING HOT!

Please continue more 8D
NinjaSheik chapter 4 . 9/24/2009
OH...MY...GOD! OH, MY GOD! OH, MY GOD! UPDATE SOON!
UnratedCrimsonBlood chapter 4 . 9/24/2009
That was CRAZY! I really like this story, good job! Keep up the good work.
Shadow2485 chapter 3 . 9/16/2009
Love it update soon
NinjaSheik chapter 3 . 7/13/2009
AWESOME! UPDATE SOON!
Amon2 chapter 3 . 7/13/2009
That was so sweet and cute, Demyx and his kid together are like theepitome of kawaii, please write more.
WordMouse chapter 2 . 6/3/2009
I hope Axel has a babY!

I hope Roxy has a baby!

I hope Xemmy has a baby... with Ansem!

I hope Riku has a baby... with Ansem!

Baby baies bahbeh babe bebe!

I hope DiZ slows down the big pimpin' before he starts his own country.

XDXDXDXD

1. When a child moves in it's mother, IT FUGGIN' HURTS!

2. It seemed very rushed and your paragraphs ran together.

3. Wai no RoXel?

.lololol
Buka2000 chapter 2 . 6/3/2009
That was really well done. I shall give you a giant cookie, the flavor of your choice. Mostly for Demyx actually having the baby naturally instead of a c-section like so many other mpregs I've read.

So that is a big kudos from me.
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