Reviews for Spy Princess Karate Queen ch 1
Sean Malloy-1 chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
No Bond, no names at all actually, and not much of a plot to go on or explaination of what is going on.
ollie chapter 1 . 9/24/2010
this is my opinion but this is not very cleverly structured you've said nothing about bond and its one short chapter so not much has happend these new characters who are they?
Ratchet Soulraven chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
Not bad, just a few spelling errors.

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seirever chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
I really enjoyed reading this. It is very descriptive, creative and imaginative. Your characters are very clear and I like your style of writing. Very good vocabulary. If I have to make a criticism (which I do) I would say you need to watch your spelling, a few mistakes.
Bethony Walsh chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Lol, nice, thanks for sharing! Is there more? :)
Absolutely Fabulous chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
You've got good potential and very good writing skills. However, remember to punctuate speech properly, and I'd like to see some kind of explanation as to what was actually happening and who these people are exactly. You were probably going to add that anyway.