|Reviews for Shifting in the Sands|
| secret chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
sweet love,LOVE SUCKS
| Dolphingirl32173 chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Sarah: fascinating. i hope by now you will have gotten the book and read it. But i'm not gonna spoil it, either way. I hate it when my friends spoil stuff for me, and i get into arguments with them all the time because of it. so i won't spoil it for you. great job on the one-shot. even though you have Poseidon and Athena way outta character. they are both too proud to do such things, though they might still attend the wedding.
| Adonai63 chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Short and simple. Very nice.
| sf chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
annabeth and Percy kiss in the end of the last Olympian
| racooncity chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Wait, what happened to Poseidon-Athena? Did they forbid the two lovesick couple to not seeing each other? I DO read the book, but I can miss things easily, seeing my memory isn't as good as it had been (even I'm still young). So, if you don't mind, what happened in the first place, actually?
| cece chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
you need to finish this dang story and get rid of this clif-hanger. the clif-hanger really suks (even though i think i know whats going to happen).
| Baeden chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
...8D oh my gods, the cuteness! I loved it, especially the last sentence!
| the random sunshine person chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
seriously, you thought this was bad? this is great! don't put urself down like that, it only makes it easier for people to get u down, trust me (not that any of the other people here are bad). awesome book. awesome story
| Ruled-by-Books chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
This was overall pretty good. A little iffy (whether that's a word or not) on the character's actions, but good all the same. I know you said you didn't want a review, but you should always want reviews good or bad, (as long as they're concrit) and concrit is all i try to give out.
| escapedreality chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
nicee. i haven't read LO either. i want to though!
| xXBookworm4evaXx chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
WOW! that was really good! I haven't read the last olympian either, so I can't spoil it for you! U did a great job!
| Percabethfan98 chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
"Not my best work"! As if!