|Reviews for Heart Remains a Child|
| honeyrachiel chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
pls update pls
| J. Merritt chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
Nice. A well written and paced story. Simple, short and yet intriguing.
| Gragagagagagagaga chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Good first chapter!
| Norehnka chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
Nice beginning! There are not a lot of stories that use that little sentence Hoggle said to Sarah about not leaving the center and as i recall, they were all good stories! ( hehe, enough pression on you now? XD Just kidding) It sounds promising! Hope you'll update soon!
| hazlgrnLizzy chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
An interesting story, and I look forward in seeing where you take it!
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Very nice. I love all your stories. Apparently you caught the Labyrinth bug. I'm glad. If only more would get it with your quality of writing. Please continue.
| Glitter Poisoned My Blood chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
OH HOT DAMN THIS IS MY FAN FICTION! - A
Sorry, N is away.
A without N
| Athena's Avatar chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
Oh...er.. urg... more? I like your characterizations so far. I want to know what J means by those cryptic statements.
| Ayjah chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
| notwritten chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
Very interesting reading today. Keep smiling. :-)
| black moon inu chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
Hey that was good I can't wait to see what happens next I really can't wait till you post. I want a soon.
hugs and puppies
| Aysuh chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
It's interesting! I'll follow this story toknow what will come next!:D
| lonely 27 chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
omg...this story already sounds so good...please write more..u could really go somewhere w/it...update asap