Reviews for Maximum Ride: The World Just Doesn't Stay Saved
Silverbird121 chapter 9 . 11/12/2009
*jaw drops*

Ter Borcht is... the VOICE? Oh my gosh...
Yet to have an account chapter 3 . 10/25/2009
isn't it strange how fang and max go alone? (sarcastic tone)
melissaeverlasting chapter 17 . 10/20/2009
So now she's in YOUR head? *won't say creepy, won't say creepy...* :)
TaffyGirl chapter 16 . 10/8/2009
Wow...Angel is really...scary. XD
melissaeverlasting chapter 16 . 10/7/2009
Angel. Is. Creepy. I know I've gotta stop saying that for every chapter, but she IS. I think you do a great job with her, too.

-Melissa
nina chapter 16 . 10/7/2009
omg!

write more fast!

this is really good! please write more!
melissaeverlasting chapter 15 . 10/2/2009
:) This was quite the creative chapter. Very good!

-Melissa
Vamps-with-Wings chapter 14 . 9/19/2009
Well sorry! I used all of my genius making the creatures up. Now you expect me to come up with a name to? Kidding, only kidding. I really don't know what to name them though. Robot Things That Are On A Mission To Kill The Flock? That may be a bit too long though, lol.

Wow, that was creepy at the end. How did Angel kill him though? With her mind, I'm guessing.
melissaeverlasting chapter 14 . 9/18/2009
Good chapter. (: Angel is always creepy...

-Melissa
vampire-wizard-with-wings chapter 13 . 9/16/2009
OMG! THAT MADE ME LOL... SERIOUSLY... and you know that i did bcuz u heard me... mhm thats rite! how do you come up with this stuff? it sounds like it could be a real story by an author... its really good :) plz dont stop till ur done writting this.. otherwise i will cry... and you know what happens when i cry...
vampire-wizard-with-wings chapter 12 . 9/16/2009
this was very good i like how you make it so it sounds like something that jp might write... not that u r or anything... but for a teenagerish (im guessing) this is really good :)
Vamps-with-Wings chapter 12 . 9/12/2009
Wow. Crying. Delusional Max, lasting for about two point five seconds. Ripping out feathers. Picking locks with said feathers. Failed attempt to beat up the monsters. Shattering sounds coming from Angel. Success in defeating the monsters. Running down a hallway. Busy day, huh?

Glad you finally updated! I was getting worried for awhile.
mebeemmy chapter 6 . 9/11/2009
noo!

great story, tho!
mebeemmy chapter 2 . 9/11/2009
woow! THIS IS REALLY AWESOME!
melissaeverlasting chapter 12 . 9/11/2009
Good chapter! Sorry I don't have anything to say, I know nothing about action scenes... But yours was good, in my unprofessional opinion. XD

-Melissa
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