|Reviews for In Motion|
| anime2 chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Amazing. Wish you would write a sequel. :)
| Blaze828 chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
| CharliDenae chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Wow! I know this story is an example for a contest, but it is really great! Of course, all of your stories are really great, but I love the premise of this one. It could go in so many directions. Of course, the lemons are hot and Jasper and Alice are perfect, but that's the way we like 'em!
| naughtysauce chapter 2 . 3/17/2010
Are you planning on updating?
because i really hope you do!
i love this story ... obsessed :P
| ybee chapter 2 . 10/7/2009
Very hot.. I adore Jasper & Alice in any situation so I'm glad to have found your fics. Can't wait to read more!
| Stephycats7785 chapter 2 . 9/12/2009
Lyrics really fit. I hope you write more..Id love to see what happens.
| Stephycats7785 chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
I like that how even tho they are in seperate clicks they are still drawn to eachother. And that was hot.. was like dang. I cant wait to see what happens.
| jajo chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Very hot. Can't wait to read your longer story if this is a taste of what is to come. :)
| SexyBelle chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
So sexy and hot!
| MaleficentKnits chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
wow, sweetie... cannot imagine how I missed this little one shot... especially when comparing licking a nipple to licking the center of an oreo cookie is so completely hot and nasty. Mal gives it two thumbs up sweetie!
| xXxlizardxXx chapter 2 . 6/2/2009
good story! i really liked it! well done!
| Dizzygrl28 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
I have a thing for car sex and I agree with Alice, "Fuck that was hot."
| Tyler Conners chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
| MrsKatyCullen chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
I would LOVE to see this as a story! Maybe this is just the beginning of a long relationship :). Too bad it's only a one-shot, but I definitely LOVED it!
Keep up the good work :D
| Realynn8 chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
This was brilliant, I liked it very much. Too bad it is only a one-shot, cause I would love to read more. All the possibilities this story could go, I think it could be amazing. :) Think about it. ;) Anyway, whatever you decide, I will respect it. Great story!