Reviews for Hidden
Laucius chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
Oh God... THIS IS AMAZING! I NEVER SEEN FANFICTION LIKE THIS! SO BEAUTIFUL! Eh? *Ahem* Sorry for my yell, anyway, your fanfiction is amazing
Ai-chan009 chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
This is an amazing story you've created. Kudos.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Cute!
outwitted chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
rehjbfnrchde- so cute ;A;

I cried forever on this one :'D
TinyAngel16 chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
it was awesome! i really loved it! it would be great if you continued this!
Cased In Darkness chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
Aaw, that was sweet.

I love how you named the turtle tortuga (a turtle named turtle, lol)
hydro-serpent58 chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
~Aw! Luke's so sweet and cute! / He was so innocent too, this must have been when he was around 10 or 11. :) Guy...I can't believe he didn't notice Luke crying. D: *smacks Guy*

Guy: Ow! What was that for?

Me: For hurting Luke without noticing it.

Guy: Wha-

*I pounce on him*

Guy: Ack! Get...Off...Me... *turns pale*

Me: You better get over your phobia soon before I cling to you for the rest of your life. *hugs*

Guy: WHAT?

Me: Don't worry, I love Sync as well. ;) So you won't have me all to yourself.

Guy: Luke...help...

Luke: ...you deserved that.

Guy: O.O

Me: *giggles* Arigato ~Luke-kun. _

Guy: NO!

LOL. I luv torturing Guy. xD Anyway, I love the turtle. This part made me laugh hard:

Luke treaded down the hallway and focused on the ground. 'Must...make it...to room...' In the corner of his eye, he saw a baby turtle walk past him. He sweatdropped as he stopped, and dropped everything to the ground. "Okay that's it. Break time."

HAHAHA! The baby turtle walked past him. 3 Too cute.

~hydro-serpent58
AnnoCat chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
This has been so cute! X3 I mean really really cute! X3 Lol, I just love it alot! ~3
Takigawa Tetsuyakun chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Cool, are you going to update this one or it's a one short? Anyway I love the story
Tsukiri chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
As much as I love Sync, and Guy, and the fact that you could put them together (lol) I just kept gawking and 'aw~~'ing and all those other stuff as I read this O.O.O.O.O.O It's so beautiful *tear*
seemslikeaporno chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
Ohai~ 8D

This story is so cute. I absolutely loved how you put the flower into play, it made the story so much more touching and easier to relate to.

The only thing that I persoanlly wouldn't have done, was put lyrics in there, but that's really just me. No singing in my stories, nono. 8D But in this case, the lyrics really worked, though I found myself skimming over them to get to the rest of the story.

And of course, my favorite part is the turtle :D

Also, I'm pretty sure I read this somewhere on LiveJournal. o.o Not sure.
accident prone chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
oh, geez. the duke is such an asshole. flowers are awesome!

anyway, i liked it. i'd read more if you wrote more...
Ninja of Thunder chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
OH MY FREAKING GOD THAT WAS SO AWESOME! Anywho- good job and yes, I aactually took time that could be spent annoying my bro to review your story! I swear I'm actually going to start playing tales of the abyss now. I heart Luke! And Guy is so cool! Luke's father is a freak though. btw I'm glad you found something useful to apply Don't Speak to so maybe now you'll stop singing it in computers. So yea, as you can tell I really really really liked this. Wow, this is already the longest review I've ever given someone. Oh well, your story was worth it! Keep ignoring school!
SkyySoriel chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
aw, this is so sweet. continue! this was so beautifully written. i'd absolutely love to read more. :)