Reviews for House Is Not In The House
momsboys chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
Very good story. I hope you are going to continue it. I would love to read more.
BandGeek58407 chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
I liked this concept, especially since everyone's focusing on House after the finale. But I don't think the absence of dialogue worked with this-the way you set it up had a lot relying on conversation, and restating what was said instead of putting it in quotation marks makes the storyline come across like a plot summary more than a narrative. It's my teachers' favorite reminder: show, don't tell. Usually a no-dialogue format would work more naturally with a personal reflection fic, something that focuses solely on thoughts and mental/emotional state. Not every format functions well with every type of plot. Reworked, this fic could be awesome! Really, I loved the idea and your writing itself is great. :)