Reviews for The First Step
T chapter 2 . 6/9/2012
Is this finished? If so add Complete to the story!
Lenap chapter 2 . 9/27/2009
ohh)) that was very nie as well)

good start i must say))

have u planes for writing more?
Lenap chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
oh)) that's very interesting beginig - will go to read hext chaps)
Lord of the Shadows chapter 2 . 8/21/2009
I liked this a lot. A nice take on their budding friendship. : )
The Phantom Dragon chapter 2 . 7/9/2009
yes i will agree with you on seeing Spock laughing

next chapter pls
Vulcan Wolf chapter 2 . 6/15/2009
when did spock smile in The Voyage Home? I don't remember him smiling. Did I miss something? Loved the story, btw. Excellent!
Silver-ShadowSpark chapter 2 . 6/12/2009
I like it. I don't know if it does either, but it might be as close as we get.

yumi2482 chapter 2 . 6/12/2009
yep the day Spock laughs will definitely be one for the books...snort! If that day ever comes. awesome, love the interaction
rockyshadow chapter 2 . 6/12/2009
Kirk explaining human idioms could take much more time than it would probably take for Spock to get him to sickbay. I do like that they are both trying to understand each other. Spock does smile occasionally in the original series so he will probably learn to do that eventually. It will be interesting to see what you come up with next.
Katherine chapter 2 . 6/11/2009
Katherine chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
Yay! Thank you! I've been wanting to read a Kirk/Spock friendship, and I found a great one! Awesome! Great work! :D
yumi2482 chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
aww, nice
rockyshadow chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
This story would fit in perfectly with the way their friendship is by the end of the movie. In the early stages of their friendship conversations will be a little awkward, but they'll get better at it. Like Spock Prime said they are and forever will be friends.
XSunny chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Yeah, the friendship between them is fantastic!
dragonwitch250 chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
I like. And maybe you should do one in Spock's view. Great Job!
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