Reviews for Mahawara
Mija chapter 6 . 6/22/2013
Lovely )
Linstock chapter 6 . 7/10/2011
I am awed by how you say so much with so few words. These are wonderful , glittering diamonds . I do hope you are inspired to write some more sometime.
RagamuffinSundrop chapter 6 . 2/8/2011
This is beautiful
andaere chapter 6 . 5/24/2009
Aww... these are really sweet and well-written. I loved all of the Swahili. I don't know anything about it, but it seems like a pretty language.
AtanaM chapter 6 . 5/22/2009
I absolutely love this. It is perfect in its simplicity. Thank you!
maya-plus-sistine chapter 6 . 5/20/2009
Oh! I read all six in one breath..they're so poignant, simple yet meaningful. I think Spock/Uhura's relationship is built upon these fleeting moments that signify so much given the characteristics/situations of these two people (especially Spock). Beautiful!
Hepburn chapter 6 . 5/20/2009
I love your drabble series. It captures Spock and Uhura so nicely!

You tell a good tale and you should go for a longer version! :)
close my account now chapter 6 . 5/19/2009
Aw... I loved it so sweet!
januaryfreeze92 chapter 6 . 5/19/2009
That was adorable. I must admit, the first one is my favorite - strangely in character. I could imagine that happening, which just warms my heart!
Kryska chapter 6 . 5/19/2009
Your story is so cute, so full of emotion. I loved it!
23roses chapter 6 . 5/18/2009
lovely. tho I certainly hope for more before the next movie!
crypticnotions chapter 6 . 5/18/2009
Beautiful. Each drabble is so concise and perfect.

cn.
BaiLynn chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
I thought they would be together in the original, it didn't shock me to see it in the movie. It warmed my heart though. And I had a big smile on my face while jaws dropped around me. Spock needed a girl. And he got the hottest girl...kudos!
BaiLynn chapter 3 . 5/18/2009
I adored the opening line. "Happiness tinged with guilt"

Bravo.
mintmelodygirl chapter 6 . 5/18/2009
i found your little drabbles to be heart warming and sweet. i hop you decide to continue them in the future. and if you are like me are looking forward to the evolving relationship between them.
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