Reviews for Fates Mistake
Fallow52 chapter 1 . 8/20
Kudos :)
Foxy Engineer chapter 1 . 6/23
The Ghostly Minion chapter 1 . 3/9
This s a really good one-shot. Having Lily open Harry's eyes to who his best friend really was is an ingenious idea.

I thought the subplot tension between the two was really a bit unnecessary, however. They should have gone to the ball together, Harry should have been able to tell her what went on with the dragon.

I like Luna in this story, but there needed to be a reason why she had the information on magical contracts when Hermione didn't. Perhaps it was in the Ravenclaw library where Hermione couldn't access it.

The second task turned out to be a complete fiasco for Dumbledore and the Ministry. Harry's reaction was very predictable. A good job sorting out Dumbledore and getting out of Britain.

Australia is very good here and works for this story. There are two questions that come to mind though. First, I would think that, at the least, they would find a way to get Sirius, Lupin, Neville and Luna down under. They really owe it to them, particularly Neville and Luna. Second, what is this love affair with the surname 'Puckle'? Must have and inside joke meaning. 8) Ah well.

I didn't miss the irony in Voldemort's demise. All in all very nice.

D. Page Robin
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 1/1
lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Aka-Baka Hoshi chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
Tee hee hee! Nice! Excellent job! Very well-written.
agnar chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
I don't get why this Harry ignored half of his mothers advice, as in 'Harry, refuse to take part in the tournament, it will cause you heartache'!

The next morning he goes and takes part in the fucking tournament! Bonehead.
Ice Demon Ranger chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
Good, a bit fast in the ending. But good.
missgsmith51 chapter 1 . 2/27/2014
I enjoyed your story. I think you appropriately portrayed all of the mixed signals that would have occurred between Harry and Hermione as they attempted to work their way toward the truth in their hearts.

I'm really enjoying your H&H stories.
wpl chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
great story, a good read, keep writing.
DragonTamer01 chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
I've said it before, and I will sure as hell say it again, you are one of the best Harry/Hermione writers on this entire site!
Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
"Harry Potter was indirectly responsible for the death of Tom Riddle when he had used his power of persuasion on his godfather and professor Lupin to save Pettigrew's life." DELICIOUSLY ironic! :-D
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
really liked it
Lionasha No Bruja chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
This story was a lot of fun and I see that it was published several years ago, so my only nitpick is where are Sirius and Remus during all of this? Does Harry hate them too or do they follow him to Australia? They're not mentioned except in past, in the end.
madnessdownunder2 chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
very nice!
HoosierCullen chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Different but very good. I liked how Dumbledore being his daft self screwed up by placeing Hermione in the Lake for the second task and on more occasion found himself taking a leisurely swim against his will.
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