|Reviews for Fates Mistake|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/14
Good story but what happened to Sirius ? Would he not have tried to help him? Or why not?
| tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 2/5
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/2
Extremely out of character for Hermione to ditch harry or try and force him to forgive Ron. Harry was always the one trying to guilt Hermione into forgiving Ron and ditching Hermione at the drop of a hat whenever Ron had one of his fits. Hermione never once ditched harry except for in the extremely out of character book six that all Hermione fans can agree was like Hermione had been body snatched.
| Blazeb79 chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
| Fallow52 chapter 1 . 8/20/2015
| Foxy Engineer chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 1 . 3/9/2015
This s a really good one-shot. Having Lily open Harry's eyes to who his best friend really was is an ingenious idea.
I thought the subplot tension between the two was really a bit unnecessary, however. They should have gone to the ball together, Harry should have been able to tell her what went on with the dragon.
I like Luna in this story, but there needed to be a reason why she had the information on magical contracts when Hermione didn't. Perhaps it was in the Ravenclaw library where Hermione couldn't access it.
The second task turned out to be a complete fiasco for Dumbledore and the Ministry. Harry's reaction was very predictable. A good job sorting out Dumbledore and getting out of Britain.
Australia is very good here and works for this story. There are two questions that come to mind though. First, I would think that, at the least, they would find a way to get Sirius, Lupin, Neville and Luna down under. They really owe it to them, particularly Neville and Luna. Second, what is this love affair with the surname 'Puckle'? Must have and inside joke meaning. 8) Ah well.
I didn't miss the irony in Voldemort's demise. All in all very nice.
D. Page Robin
| Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
| IsoldeAhlstrom chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
Tee hee hee! Nice! Excellent job! Very well-written.
| agnar chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
I don't get why this Harry ignored half of his mothers advice, as in 'Harry, refuse to take part in the tournament, it will cause you heartache'!
The next morning he goes and takes part in the fucking tournament! Bonehead.
| Ice Demon Ranger chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
Good, a bit fast in the ending. But good.
| missgsmith51 chapter 1 . 2/27/2014
I enjoyed your story. I think you appropriately portrayed all of the mixed signals that would have occurred between Harry and Hermione as they attempted to work their way toward the truth in their hearts.
I'm really enjoying your H&H stories.
| wpl chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
great story, a good read, keep writing.
| DragonTamer01 chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
I've said it before, and I will sure as hell say it again, you are one of the best Harry/Hermione writers on this entire site!
| Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
"Harry Potter was indirectly responsible for the death of Tom Riddle when he had used his power of persuasion on his godfather and professor Lupin to save Pettigrew's life." DELICIOUSLY ironic! :-D