|Reviews for T h u n d e r s t o r m|
| FanficWolfess17 chapter 8 . 8/23/2014
I just HAD to read all you had before commenting! It's adorable :D I feel so bad for Ribbon, but mostly Monferno ; Didn't mean to scare her or anything and he still got scolded XD
Anyway, keep up the good work! I can't wait to see what you write next! :D
| me chapter 8 . 11/25/2013
Please continue writing
| Shade Revrac chapter 8 . 11/7/2013
I love this story! I wasn't sure what to think with Pikachu being a female at first but I love how you made it work with the TV show. I think Pulse is my favorite. And you portray the characters wonderfully. I can't wait to read more :)
| Sintarious chapter 8 . 9/6/2013
I've read this story I don't know how many times and I gotta say, I absolutely LOVE it. It hasn't been updates in forever though, PLEASE tell me you going to continue. I'll be devastated if you just leave it like this :(
The kits are so adorable! I can so see Ribbon being a PokeMusical pokemon ... MAYBE a PokeStar pokemon if she ever decided to learn to fight just a little bit. I can just picture a wall, or at least a shelf, in the Ketchem house full of ribbons and such that she's won. Pulse and Sprite would be excellent battlers along side their mother and team members.
Please, please, PLEASE, continue.
| Dustchu chapter 8 . 3/11/2013
Whoa, Ash's dad is here? I'm assuming its Giovanni? good chapter, can't wait to see the next one.
| Dustchu chapter 7 . 3/11/2013
HAHAHAAA! this is funny, good chapter, jeez reviewing four stories is hard. good work on this buddy :D:D:D:D
| Dustchu chapter 6 . 3/11/2013
Heh, If my pokemon was going through that I couldn't leave her alone. I'd be there to comfort her and stuff. good chapter and great writing.
| Dustchu chapter 5 . 3/10/2013
Whoooooooooa Ash's dad?! Holy crap! good chapter.
| Dustchu chapter 4 . 3/10/2013
Pikachu and Ash friends for life. Shippidy shippdiy shippidy! :D:D:D:D:D great chapter. good writing.
| Dustchu chapter 2 . 3/10/2013
Pikachu, Pichu, and Ash. this could be interesting. could Ash have to act like a dad? that would be interesting :D:D:D I'm a Pikashipper, can't help it. good chapter
| Dustchu chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
Hmm, I like the Ash/Pikachu fics, I thought that this fic was going that way. oh well, good start guy.
| BeanieBlast chapter 8 . 3/4/2013
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG OuO LOOOOOVE Them hun Please don't tell me this is it?
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/7/2012
| Scribbleknots chapter 8 . 8/12/2012
I've read your entire story, and I must say it is a really good book. I've only noticed one flaw...
A girl pikachu actually has a knotch in her tail, and boys don't. So Ash was actually right that Pikachu's a boy. But other than that, THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FANFICS I'VE READ.
| Nightmother chapter 8 . 5/7/2012
Oh no! Daddy's here!
On another note, the little kits are so adorable...