Reviews for Love on a school trip
harish chapter 1 . 1/11/2016
fandomtrash54 chapter 1 . 2/14/2015
This was just bad ,if you fix the grammer and add some more descriptions during the sex parts, it would be a good fanfic
UzumakiWrestlesSupernatural chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Hey. (This isnt anna, i know she does come on here). Anyway this story does have a good plot. But it needs work. Like with the grammar. But I could understand it :-). If you need a BETA i'll be happy to do it.

sivolobwho chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Umm... no offense, but learn to type, learn grammar, learn how to construct a climactic story, and rewrite this. It had a good... storyline... but it moved way too fast, and due to the extreme lack of any kind of punctuation, it was VERY hard to understand.