|Reviews for The Cave|
| Wolf girl chapter 1 . 11/4
I wish this happens in the books
| Tesnov Santhi chapter 1 . 11/2
your descriptions of the movements of the characters an the setting really bring this scene to life, it makes this even more believable.
as an experienced writer thus showing my comprehensive opinion, i would most vanishingly my own opinion in words that even the most of complex vocabulary cannot acces, i want to make clear that this writing is marvelous, very good job indeed, i don't usually recommend continuing this sort of text but for now, make it a goal to keep going.
| nameforchanting chapter 1 . 11/1
while I did absolutely enjoy that, I wouldn't want to deny you the pleasure of a firepit ritual so HAVE at me
| ForASecondThereWe'dWon chapter 1 . 7/27
I was into this story from the very start, but when Peeta calls Katniss "my love," I like, lost my mind. Such a lovely touch. Very well done.
| SuperGiGi chapter 1 . 7/7
Is it bad that I liked your savagery in the A/N more than the story itself? I still liked the story though, and thought that you got Katniss's character juuuuuuuuuust right.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/3
This is so lemony! Great!
| A Horny Old Dog chapter 1 . 6/28
Fuck me with your balls instead daddy.
| boi chapter 1 . 6/22
| scifigrrl chapter 1 . 4/13
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/22
This was really good
| haymitcheffie chapter 1 . 2/5
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/27
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2016
That AN though... you sound like a savage
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2016
I really liked this. Keep up the good work.
| DaSeskyBishFuxYa chapter 1 . 8/22/2016
Lovely. Love it a lot. Write more darling. Really hot and sexy and made me wet my panties. SEXY!