|Reviews for Because of You redo|
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/23/2016
This is great!
| Daisy Bokoblin chapter 4 . 10/21/2014
GAH! I want more! I will be on the lookout for more, even if it never happens! I love this story so much! :D
| Sobiha326 chapter 4 . 9/3/2013
| Marth chapter 4 . 12/10/2012
That a boy! keep it up. getting pretty interesting. do you drw Marth and Samus?
| Marth chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
This is awsome! Can you continue freedom though?
| wolfeclipse25 chapter 4 . 10/19/2012
Marth is learning... Slowly but surely. Good story! Update soon!
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/4/2012
Are you continuing
| ScribeOfRED chapter 4 . 4/11/2012
*peeks into chapter* Oh, my goodness. An update? How exciting!
I found this story more than a year ago, and absently stuck it in my watch list. I didn't expect this long a wait, but I don't hold it against you in the least. My sister is a phenomenal artist and I know just how much time goes into any given piece of art.
In any case, I'm thrilled you've decided to continue this story. I loved the original, but this redo is much, much better. You're deepening the characters so much, and the added details are wonderful. I did spot a few grammar errors, all of which would take only a moment to fix.
If you ever decide you want a beta, don't hesitate to PM me. I love working with other authors.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter,
| Amagake chapter 3 . 11/23/2010
I love it so far. You've really got the character's nailed and it flows well. Can't wait for the next part! :D
| Nobody chapter 3 . 11/18/2010
Very good so far. Roy is such a sweetie. I can't wait to read more from you!
| nameisDooM chapter 3 . 11/15/2010
Epic, that is all I can say, epic.
So what happens? Is Marth going to be okay?
is Roy a creeper?
| Mariko Midori chapter 3 . 11/15/2010
I'm liking this story! I'm a huge fan of Marth!
| Someone chapter 3 . 11/15/2010
This is a very interesting story and I can't wait to read more! You write very awesomely D
| nameisDooM chapter 2 . 11/14/2010
WOH, Tripple poast mutch!
But still, ceep up the good work, I am proud of you!
| shadylemon chapter 2 . 11/13/2010
hehe I'm loving this story so far! keep it up 33