Reviews for Because of You redo
Guest chapter 4 . 4/23
This is great!
Daisy Bokoblin chapter 4 . 10/21/2014
GAH! I want more! I will be on the lookout for more, even if it never happens! I love this story so much! :D
Sobiha326 chapter 4 . 9/3/2013
update asap.
Marth chapter 4 . 12/10/2012
That a boy! keep it up. getting pretty interesting. do you drw Marth and Samus?
Marth chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
This is awsome! Can you continue freedom though?
wolfeclipse25 chapter 4 . 10/19/2012
Marth is learning... Slowly but surely. Good story! Update soon!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/4/2012
Are you continuing
ScribeOfRED chapter 4 . 4/11/2012
*peeks into chapter* Oh, my goodness. An update? How exciting!

I found this story more than a year ago, and absently stuck it in my watch list. I didn't expect this long a wait, but I don't hold it against you in the least. My sister is a phenomenal artist and I know just how much time goes into any given piece of art.

In any case, I'm thrilled you've decided to continue this story. I loved the original, but this redo is much, much better. You're deepening the characters so much, and the added details are wonderful. I did spot a few grammar errors, all of which would take only a moment to fix.

If you ever decide you want a beta, don't hesitate to PM me. I love working with other authors.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter,

RED~Head
Amagake chapter 3 . 11/23/2010
I love it so far. You've really got the character's nailed and it flows well. Can't wait for the next part! :D
Nobody chapter 3 . 11/18/2010
Very good so far. Roy is such a sweetie. I can't wait to read more from you!
nameisDooM chapter 3 . 11/15/2010
Epic, that is all I can say, epic.

So what happens? Is Marth going to be okay?

is Roy a creeper?
Mariko Midori chapter 3 . 11/15/2010
I'm liking this story! I'm a huge fan of Marth!
Someone chapter 3 . 11/15/2010
This is a very interesting story and I can't wait to read more! You write very awesomely D
nameisDooM chapter 2 . 11/14/2010
WOH, Tripple poast mutch!

But still, ceep up the good work, I am proud of you!
shadylemon chapter 2 . 11/13/2010
hehe I'm loving this story so far! keep it up 33
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