Reviews for She Kissed Him Instead
Tropicallight chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
JordanMax chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
I love this!
Stars.Are.Metaphors chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
Holy- that was amazing. So beautiful!
Steveaaml chapter 1 . 10/7/2009


I loved this one a lot.

Beautifully sweet and short.

Lyrics and Music chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
So short yet so gripping.

Loved it.
tatewaki2000 chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
I'm surprised. o.o That was really well done! The one shot seemed so tiny and inconspicuous...but that was really good. :D Beautiful ending.
JC-zala chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Well done. Short yet very good story.
pkshpr chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
I like the fact that this and your last story both seem to intend to show what kind of persons Ash and Misty are and how their relationship is working rather than being just plot driven stories, if that makes any sense ’ It is really impressive how much in character they are.

But please please don’t always stop with the kiss! I yearn to see his reaction and the result out of this!
Dr. Massacre chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
GK Mendoza chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Review for "She Kissed Him Instead"

1:39pm GMT

Thursday, 14 May 2009

Greetings, this is GK Mendoza reviewing!

I am impressed! The fic was short, but sweet! What Misty did to [hopefully] snap Ash from his trance was unexpected, but it would probably get Misty's unspoken message clear to poor Ash!

Short review ends here. More power, and keep up the good work!
cellophane prince chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
Ronmione x3 chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
Awhh, sad, cute, and super emotional. -)

Gotta love that AAML!
KawaiixCherryxBlossom chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
Very nice story. It was very realistic and not too over the top with words. Short one-shots like this are hard to write well, but you really pulled it off. Great job!