Reviews for Lost In Translation |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it a lot! Please dont stop! It is a very good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love your writing style for this story. Keeping the perspective through Uhura, using the character of Gareth to relate what the student body thinks. It feels like I’m watching the first season of a really interesting show (if that makes any sense) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You probably do not even remember that you wrote this story, but I just read it and I'm delighted! It is absolutely perfect in every way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please finish this story because it's great! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. I am itching for more now so I am going to check out your profile. Thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Spock cooties! OMG! I do love the line 'He's like an enigma wrapped in a scowl followed by a raincloud.' |
![]() ![]() ![]() A small point - 'heals' is what a flesh wound does, 'heels' are the rear sole of a shoe. Love this story so far. You've got a strong insight into action/reaction which is nice to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is neatly written and detailed. I loved the plot and your style. I feel there isn't enough fanfic of this cute time period when they became friends. So, thank you for this. Nice work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so very thoughtful and brings up acute points on human interactions as well as imaginative ideas about Vulcan & Spock. Nicely written too. |
![]() ![]() more more more more more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Spoke to soon, lmao. The Girl Scout bit is great too. You have a way with humour, OP. I wish there was more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() “He’s like an enigma wrapped in a scowl followed by a rain cloud”—the sound I made was inhuman. Apt as hell description and best line of the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story line thus far |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really fabulous! Please update! |