|Reviews for Complicated|
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/30/2012
hey i really love your FF,but ou haven't update in three years!
are ou gonna update or not?:)
| WinterAquair chapter 6 . 4/24/2011
There's more of this right? I love it!
| mkb chapter 6 . 6/16/2009
good write more
| Bloodknite chapter 5 . 6/10/2009
Pretty good so far. The only thing is you might want to spread the spacing a bit i kept losin were i was.
| Venn364 chapter 4 . 6/8/2009
Another good chapter. A few pointers though, smaller paragraphs would make this much easier to read and you've gone quite a bit overboard with the commas in quite a few places, try to tone them down a little.
Can't wait to see what's next.
I am the master of statistical analysis, all must bow down before me!
| ilovesara801 chapter 3 . 6/5/2009
Sweet, sweet, sweet chap. I love the italicized Alula flashback scenes! Please update soon!
| Taeniaea chapter 2 . 6/5/2009
Great Chapter plz update soon
| MEGA-TOPH chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
cool story, hope you update soon :)