|Reviews for Battle for Tarchaea|
| Fortune Zyne chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
This is a nice story! Well done!
| Krivoklatsko chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
But isn't Caleda no longer "the pure" now?
| Lord Magos Jadinar chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Good intro but there paragrahps as mentioned before by others, are a bit to choppy. Try to lengthen your chapters too, though I know that the first chapter is usually always the shortest. Action is pretty good, keep it up.
| Jack Keller chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Well, I'm interested. But you need your style to be less broken up. Have solid paragraphs, man! A paragraph is like a regiment of Guard; too large and it cannot be coped with, too small and it is worthless. Unless you have Kasrkin. :3
| TorrentJ chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Ohh! What will happen?