|Reviews for While You Were Gone|
| OrchidsMoon chapter 15 . 3/2
Could definitely use some work but I like the story so far. Also, canon Tanya is the Denali coven leader, but I figure you made Elizear leader so I'd be easier to sway Tanya back to the side of light? Eh *shrugs* figured I'd mention it. I like how Bella sees the future, makes sense. It was kinda weird to mention it the first time at basically the end of the story but I like the thought process.
| Nicoconsd chapter 17 . 8/7/2017
Thank you for this wonderful fun adventure :)
| jk chapter 1 . 6/7/2017
I find it strange that bella is calling out in her thoughts for a man that isn't even fucking around to save her!
Edward...help me...save me Edward...I know we broke up and you don't love me...AND you moved out of town...but...help me...save me...im so motherfucking pathetic!...help...
| Heatherrrr chapter 10 . 4/23/2017
Love love love this so far! This chapter was so good, I was expecting them to stop though and make their virginities more special. No criticism! Love this interpretation! Can't wait to finish
| celajwhitney chapter 12 . 3/26/2017
bella is going to kick tanya's butt if she doesn't watch out!
| celajwhitney chapter 10 . 3/26/2017
| Kushka chapter 17 . 11/11/2016
| Reinbeau chapter 17 . 3/22/2016
One of the GOOD ones!
| Eliella45 chapter 7 . 3/13/2016
Oh my God, that was amazing. Loved it.
| Eliella45 chapter 6 . 3/13/2016
Hmm, interesting, what's going to happen next?
| Eliella45 chapter 5 . 3/13/2016
Uh uh, it's not going to be pretty, Edward's gonna pay for it.
| Eliella45 chapter 4 . 3/13/2016
Oh oh, here they are what's going to happen now? Good chapter. Enjoyed it.
| Eliella45 chapter 3 . 3/13/2016
Poor Cullens, this is going to be bad for them. Great chapter, very well written.
| Eliella45 chapter 2 . 3/13/2016
My God, this is very intense. Liked it.
| Eliella45 chapter 1 . 3/13/2016
Very interesting. Gonna read more.