Reviews for While You Were Gone
OrchidsMoon chapter 15 . 3/2
Could definitely use some work but I like the story so far. Also, canon Tanya is the Denali coven leader, but I figure you made Elizear leader so I'd be easier to sway Tanya back to the side of light? Eh *shrugs* figured I'd mention it. I like how Bella sees the future, makes sense. It was kinda weird to mention it the first time at basically the end of the story but I like the thought process.
Nicoconsd chapter 17 . 8/7/2017
Thank you for this wonderful fun adventure :)
jk chapter 1 . 6/7/2017
I find it strange that bella is calling out in her thoughts for a man that isn't even fucking around to save her! me Edward...I know we broke up and you don't love me...AND you moved out of so motherfucking pathetic!
Heatherrrr chapter 10 . 4/23/2017
Love love love this so far! This chapter was so good, I was expecting them to stop though and make their virginities more special. No criticism! Love this interpretation! Can't wait to finish
celajwhitney chapter 12 . 3/26/2017
bella is going to kick tanya's butt if she doesn't watch out!
celajwhitney chapter 10 . 3/26/2017
Kushka chapter 17 . 11/11/2016
Great story
Reinbeau chapter 17 . 3/22/2016
One of the GOOD ones!
Eliella45 chapter 7 . 3/13/2016
Oh my God, that was amazing. Loved it.
Eliella45 chapter 6 . 3/13/2016
Hmm, interesting, what's going to happen next?
Eliella45 chapter 5 . 3/13/2016
Uh uh, it's not going to be pretty, Edward's gonna pay for it.
Eliella45 chapter 4 . 3/13/2016
Oh oh, here they are what's going to happen now? Good chapter. Enjoyed it.
Eliella45 chapter 3 . 3/13/2016
Poor Cullens, this is going to be bad for them. Great chapter, very well written.
Eliella45 chapter 2 . 3/13/2016
My God, this is very intense. Liked it.
Eliella45 chapter 1 . 3/13/2016
Very interesting. Gonna read more.
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