Reviews for While You Were Gone
mygooddog chapter 17 . 4/6/2014
loved it! loved it! loved it!
bella0609 chapter 13 . 2/14/2014
Loved the date :) It would have been "Too perfect" if she accepted.
Why is Jake here? How did he find them? Did something happen to Charlie?
bella0609 chapter 12 . 2/10/2014
Looking forward to seeing what talents Bella's gifts have to offer. Love possessive Bella :)
bella0609 chapter 11 . 2/8/2014
Leave it to Rose to make sure things are handled right!
bella0609 chapter 10 . 2/8/2014
So glad that there is happiness in their lives. Can't wait until Edward gets his hands on Victoria!
bella0609 chapter 9 . 2/8/2014
I feel badly that Bella couldn't at least visit Charlie, but I guess that is best. Onward we go!
bella0609 chapter 8 . 2/8/2014
Favorite sentence:
I hope she keeps them guessing for the rest of eternity.
Loved it!
bella0609 chapter 7 . 2/8/2014
"If you want to know, if he loves you so, it's in his kiss" :)
bella0609 chapter 6 . 2/8/2014
Uh oh...this scares me now
Great chapter!
bella0609 chapter 5 . 2/8/2014
I'm glad he is going...I'm not looking forward to Jake and Edward's first meeting.
bella0609 chapter 4 . 2/8/2014
So, I am assuming that Edward is totally out of it and Jake wants to kill everyone!
Great chapter :)
bella0609 chapter 3 . 2/8/2014
Oh...excellent writing! I love it :)
bella0609 chapter 2 . 2/7/2014
Great chapter! You really know how to write! Loving it :)
bella0609 chapter 1 . 2/7/2014
Oh no! Alice won't be able to see her! How can Jake take care of her? This looks like a great story!
kalibean chapter 15 . 1/27/2014
I never caught that in the books! Thanks for citing the sources and making it a part if your story. It makes perfect sense.
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