Reviews for Slumber Party
Yaw6113 chapter 6 . 12/30/2019
Please write a sequel to the slumber party and have Misty introduce Ash as Ashley whenever he meets a friend of hers. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
thelittlepandagirl chapter 6 . 10/20/2018
This was so hilarious!
Sunset700 chapter 6 . 7/24/2018
Not sure if you’ll ever see this, since this story is from 2002, 16 years before my review, but this was cute. I think Brock is too old for Angie but I voiced my other minor grievances in my chapter 4 review. This story was good and very very cute. I really enjoyed it and wherever you are right now in life I hope that your continuing to write. Your a lovely author. And if you’ve moved on and never see this, I wanted to make sure I didn’t leave this uncomplimented! -Sunset700
Guest chapter 4 . 7/24/2018
I like this so far. Although I will say, some of the drama feels a little forced and Ash should really have pulled Misty aside as soon as he arrived and she could help him get revenge. That does kinda bother me that he didn’t do that but I can understand we he felt he had to fallow through anyways. Not a huge fan of “I’m a boy” being the punchline either for stuff like this, although coming in I’m not sure what else I was expecting. Those minor gripes aside I do like this. I’m going to finish it now. Keep up the good work!
Palyderp chapter 6 . 4/10/2018
Thank you for this 3
ShipQueenCandy chapter 6 . 6/7/2017
I loveddddd this!
E chapter 1 . 9/12/2015
My favourite colour is chartreuse
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
Confidently so, this is one of my favorites. After reading a painfully long string of OOC, simple, unoriginal stories, I found this. Admittedly, my reaction was the following upon reading the idea: "There are so many unsuccessful ways this can branch off. I wonder which it'll use." I was happy to see that this scraped some of the paths in a successful way, threw out a branch I didn't think of, and still managed to conclude the basic idea (chapter 5) originally. Immense applause.
aamlpokeshipping chapter 6 . 3/16/2015
xD this was so funny! Great job!
Ally chapter 6 . 7/6/2014
HAHAAHAAA! BEST STORY EVER! :D Bravo!
NeverTheMindless chapter 3 . 3/29/2014
Let the games begin!
brandonfmanning chapter 5 . 3/17/2014
Lol
brandonfmanning chapter 4 . 3/17/2014
I swear I am going to die of laughter
brandonfmanning chapter 2 . 3/17/2014
Hell no god no not what I think it is going to happen
brandonfmanning chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
What in the world were u thing were u on crack
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