Reviews for One Final Taste
kantorkan chapter 24 . 1/18/2014
I would much rather tell mom and dad to shove it and tear Eddie apart and burn him then go after Aro and take him and Jane out.
kantorkan chapter 21 . 1/18/2014
so what happened to her shield?this empath gift isn't going to help as much as her shield or does she have both? guess we will hopefully you will be writing about how Eddie ends as a pile of smoking purple ash?
kantorkan chapter 20 . 1/18/2014
so with Emo's action will this mean the end of the Volturi. I am pretty sure once she learns the truth there will be many dead vampires left in her wake.
kantorkan chapter 19 . 1/18/2014
I think Emo will regret his little plan to take her back,not win her back, don't know what will happen but i bet it will hurt a lot for Eddie that is.
kantorkan chapter 15 . 1/18/2014
So what does the little shit have on her mine to do with Emo Eddie,can't wait to see should be he really has no right to say anything about what she does any more.
kantorkan chapter 14 . 1/18/2014
As she said they are adults,so screw Alice and the rest of them also.
ForrestersWitch chapter 8 . 9/28/2013
compassionate ... OH YEAH!
alliskat93 chapter 26 . 7/12/2012
Finally! A story where Edward is the bad guy! Wooohooo! :D
Kim chapter 14 . 2/29/2012
I LOVE your version of Bella. What annoys me in so many stories is how unrealistic she seems. A lot of Bellas are like absolutely no one I know, but I feel like yours actually could exist :)
iluvseth chapter 6 . 1/29/2012
Is bella and jasper going to fall in love
Fleur24 chapter 28 . 12/13/2011
Yep I knew Eddie-boy was up to no good.

"""Wife? I thought you were with another." She shrugged. "Doesn't matter. I'm here now, and if you won't come back with me, I'll have to do what I should have done a long time ago. I wasn't sent here for no reason, after all." This is where she made a mistake that would cost both of us. She looked in my direction and smiled. Jasper didn't fail to notice, either. He turned his gaze to me and growled."" Maria maybe skilled, but she not very bright sometimes.

I'm glad that Bella was true to her word and ended Edward.
Fleur24 chapter 26 . 12/13/2011
"""I know everybody's there. I'm on my way!" Alice squealed, and the room erupted in exclamations of joy. "I'll be home soon."" YAY Alice is coming home!

""Bella was the first in her arms, followed very quickly by the rest of the family. Bella was sobbing as best as she could into her neck, and everyone else had a hand on her. I stayed back, enjoying the climate of contentment. She touched them all in return, smiling all the while. When she was able to break free, she approached me and placed her hand on my cheek.

"I can't believe you got married without me," she said, frowning playfully.

"I haven't seen you in years, and this is the first concern on your mind?" I joked, pulling her into a hug.

"Of course! I demand to see pictures, as grotesque as they're sure to be. I mean, jeans, Bella?" Alice chided. Bella only smiled and hugged her again."" AWE! Alice is back!

What is Eddie-boy up to now? He better not try anthing.
Fleur24 chapter 25 . 12/13/2011
Yep Aro was certainly surprised to see bella and Edward.

"""Jane! What's the meaning of this!" he cried.

"Aro, please let me explain. I'm hoping you can assist me. You recall what Edward did to Jasper not so long ago? I'm afraid he will try again. You said you wanted him-well, here you go."

"Bella! You're quite devious, aren't you? And what makes you think young Edward will stay? I can't force his hand as I did Jasper's-I have no leverage against him."

"Then kill him if you have to. But I don't want him near me or mine again." I was shocked with the harshness that I was capable of."" Yep Bella's devious and will anything to keep her and Jasper safe.

Poor delulsional Edward.

Bella loves Jasper, and he loves her. Get over it.
Fleur24 chapter 23 . 12/13/2011
way to the seat behind me.

"If you love him, you'll stay where you are." These words, more than any others, calmed me fractionally."" Yep that deffinitely did it.

""Attention, passengers, we'll be arriving in Rome in five minutes. Please fasten your seatbelts." The captain's voice came over the intercom, giving me a timeline to salvation. A ghost of a smile crossed Carlisle's face. I couldn't fathom what had brought it there. He noticed my incredulous look, and the smile widened.

"I'm very proud of you, Bella. That's why I'm smiling. And Jasper will be proud of you too." I wanted to cry as he looked at me like I was something special."" AWE!

Awe Alice has given herself to the Volturi in exchange for releasing Jasper.

""He must have known it as well, because he turned towards Alice and beseeched her with his eyes. "Alice, I'm not worth it. There's got to be another way." He spoke only to her, and I let them have this moment. Right now, as they looked at each other, all of their history was laid out and all of their feelings were one.

Finally, Alice smiled. "That's where you're wrong, Jasper. You are worth it."" Its so sad and yet so sweet!

At least Alice only really has to stay for 5 years.

"""You want to know the first thing I'm doing once we get home?" Jasper asked as we waited for the plane.

"You mean besides showing me how much you missed me?" I teased.

"Of course, sugar."

"Then no, I don't."

"I'm going to find Edward."" Yep Edward's dead!
Fleur24 chapter 22 . 12/13/2011
ARo knows and wants Jasper's gift. That's what Jane meant by his services.

"""It is, actually. My first son, Edward, seems to have had a little, ah, issue with Jasper in the recent past. We have reason to believe that Jasper was sent against his will." There was a pause on the other end of the line. He was either upset, or he knew about it and he was trying to think of a cover.

"That is a problem. A problem I'd be willing to discuss with you in person." Son of a bitch! I saw Carlisle's face tense, thinking of a way out. I looked around the room, but nobody was looking at me. Everyone was watching Carlisle. Finally, I heard him sigh.

"Alright. I'll be on the next plane out."

"Carlisle? I'd be delighted to meet the rest of your family as well." Nobody missed the double meaning.

"Of course." And then the line went dead. Carlisle was somber as he put his phone back in his pocket. "I'm sorry, everyone, there doesn't seem to be another way. He's been waiting for an excuse to call us to Italy for some time now-this is the perfect opportunity."" Yep Aro knows all to well what's going on. He wants all the power and gifted vampires he can get.

"""I bet that fucktard Edward promised Jasper in return for me. My safety-it's just like something he'd do. And of course Jasper would accept, the fool. But I'd bet money that he wanted you to see that, Alice. He knows we'll come for him." I knew I was right. I didn't know how I knew, but the feeling was so strong that there was just no other option."" I love this new smart, sassy Bella. Yep Jasper wanted Alice to see where he was.

Poor Jasper.

Aro's and the Volturi are going to be a pain in the butt in this story.
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