Reviews for Long Day
Aralas Baggins chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
So fluffy! So sweet XD
DT chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
I *LOVED* this. There have been many versions of the events after all the shooting stopped, but this is one of the best that I've read.

Favorite Lines:

McCoy snorted. "When's the last time you prepared for anything?"
and
"Unusual," Spock observed. "Human friendship is not usually this adversarial."

Nice! (Now do _Star Trek Into Darkness_ please! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
Well written, possibly one of my favorite outtakes
Bluebirdx96 chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
great story, enjoyed reading it ;)
Aggie2011 chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
Loved this :) Huge Star Trek fan and this was very well done :)
AngelQueen chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
Wow, awesome! :D Loved Jim talking with Pike, trying to chat up Chapel, and then being out-maneuvered by Bones and Spock. Heh, forshadowing there, you think? I have a feeling those two are going to be doing stuff like this a lot in the future. ;D

Great job! Love it!
SkyHighFan chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Nice, I like it but I doubt that Pike was in any shape to take command again so Jim probably stayed Captain back to Earth.
Luna14 chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Lol - 'did not wish to kick a puppy' - absolutely brilliant. Best line I've read in ages. :-)
Lori Jean chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
This was good, thank you.
bowlfullofcherries chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
i liked this very much.
Xtin2000 chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
wow man this is awesome! I love the way you write jim, spock and bones friendship :)
WickedBlue chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
Awesome! We all knew there had to be some repercussions after getting beaten up that much. It's a pity that this wasn't in the film. thank you very much for writing it.
Jeanca chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
*haha* Spock didn't wish to kick Puppy-Jim. And Jim asking them how far saving earth will work, hilarious! Enjoyed it a lot ;)
irezel chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
*giggle* kirk certainly is a puppy! glad spock didn't kick him. :)
NightRise chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
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