Reviews for The Paths We Choose
Guest chapter 3 . 7/16
Wow, Sasuke is even more of an avenger than he was in canon, but that balances out a colder Naruto. Lovely chapter! :)
Guest chapter 2 . 7/16
Seeing Naruto so cold is new to me, but I'm enjoying this so far! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16
This is a fascinating premise - I look forward to reading more! :)
Guest chapter 17 . 7/13
Really? So Naruto is gonna destroy neji, maybe next chapter, Sasuke conveniently decides not to copy any genjutsus and conveniently gets hit by kabuto? Well this story was a little shaky before, but now I can see it's just another Naruto all fiction. After reading other reviews on it, I'm out.
Rishi chapter 43 . 7/10
Well ..you did end it ..im happy , im getting that feel when you finished watching a great movie ...Ending was like rushed cuz its is'nt that easy to take away kyubi chakra if it would be possible yondaime would have done it too...But overall im feeling great
Thanks for completing as its rare of you to finish a story
MegaMindAuthor chapter 1 . 6/28
First and foremost, I would like to compliment you on your writing. Not the best, but really good. The whole book. Truly, the idea of Naruto turning evil intrigued me enough to continue while cringing became a habit of mine. The beginning was fine, its so different from canon such as the survival test and the wave mission that I found it good. Unfortunately, we got to the chunin exams. Man, Naruto reasons behind him feeling that the third Hokage betrayed him, STUPID! They are more valueble things that could have been used to insert betrayal between the Third and Naruto. Sasuke, didn't see any reasons for him to drop his revenge and decided he valued his teammates more than his clan. The characterization at the beginning was good for most of the characters. Except, Naruto. His reasons started out so well for turning evil. He didn't care about the village liking him or not, that was fine. Then the chunin exams and everything turned out quite stupid. Hinata reasons for leaving. Non-existence as they are in my mind, I dont think a crush really seems that powerful enough to cause Hinata to leave the leaf. She was submissive, a mat, , a doll. She never questioned Naruto, always said I trust you. This love intepreted seems truly a love that is superficial. Orochimaru's interest in Naruto was also unbelievable. In canon Naruto did use the Kyuubi's chakra but Orochimaru didnt go after him. His aim was the Sharigan, why would he go after a Naruto who just used the Kyuubi's chakra to throw some overpowered kicks and punches with no skill or bloodline. And the fight scenes *cringe*. Fights in Naruto even if you are a jinchuuriki never happen like you interpreted. Never. Amaterasu could burn Naruto constantly while Naruto tried to heal, and the healing process is a slow one, sealing could have been used against him such as Orochimaru in thd forest of death, Pain was deafeated by Naruto is another unbelievable thing. Naruto never had skills that deemed him as someone who can stand against Pain and live. In canon he had to almost remove the seal to deafeat him. So many things here a truly bad. I could point them out but its a waste of my time, and who made me the expert.
Hi there chapter 43 . 6/28
Jesus Christ was that a good read. It managed to keep my attentIon locker for the entire story, which is not an easy job. You are a amazing writer by the way and I hope you continue writing what ever/whenever you want.
The Price of Power Heed My Sin chapter 24 . 6/6
Ugh why. Did you HAVE to include Hinata in the story? I mean come on seriously I was barely tolerating before I assumed her role was only a temporary thing.
jtscores chapter 43 . 5/31
I wish you had more time to finish it properly, as it's obvious that this wasn't your full intention. However, you did well with what you had, and it was impressive. Good job! :D
Guest chapter 24 . 5/22
Omg omg -sobs- chapter 24 was so beautiful. Blowing up the village and running away with Hinata. Its everything I ever dreamed of -sobs-
SlyUzumakiVii chapter 43 . 4/15
Wow lots of teary moments for myself reading this. mostly when reading about narutos cannon "family" members planning on killing him... I loved this story
SlyUzumakiVii chapter 14 . 4/15
I don't know if I'm a terrible person or may also have a demon sealed in me... (haha) but I love this naruto...
probably cuz at heart I wish I could not be so nice as I am. but either way I find myself really enjoying this...
Guest chapter 34 . 4/10
What a coincidence, I like when plans come together too.
Guest chapter 20 . 4/10
Favorite scene in any fanfic
Guest chapter 19 . 4/10
Why room 420?
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