Reviews for While Mojo's Away
RozuFanfic1212 chapter 16 . 4/29
I have came back to this fanfiction and read it all again, for the umpteeth time. And through those times and now, I was reminded of how this is my favourtie RRB fanfic ever.
Brick is always remained my favourite, and i LOVE how you write him. Also i really love PPG fics where they include the RRB and theres no romance or shipping whatsoever, or being teenagers in high school or something. I love how you made everyone canon.
I realllllllyyyyy want to see what happens next, like the RRB finding out theyre going to school from Ms. Bellum visiting them or somethingand going to school and how they handle it. or why the man at tbe door was acting really strange towards the super powered children. I really want to read the next chapter :,)
DieuGamer chapter 16 . 8/16/2023
This fanfic is honestly the best one in this whole Fandom. Between the high school AU, the fanfics involving rape (If only I was joking) and others messed up or just uninteresting things having this fanfic is most definitely welcome and a great find.
Now, I know this chapter is probably the best we will get, with the author being inactive since 2019 and all, but I have hope that someday AI will be evolved enough to write an end to this fanfiction (I assume the writer won't continue his or her story, though it would be a welcome surprise to be proven wrong).
I also downloaded the whole fanfic, just in case the author decide in the future to pull a dick move and remove it from the website, I advise the others readers to do the same.
RenesmeVivio chapter 16 . 8/21/2022
Wooooow that was awesome. I really enjoyed everything that you wrote, awwwww how adorable my super kids are. Poor BC is the only one whose not having fun with the others though, yeah cause her previous actions. Hopefully she’ll get along with them even if it’s hard.

Oh no the life is definitely so HARSH on you dear author. I wish for your mind to be in peace, and have joyous and blessing days along the way. I’ll be waiting for updates, don’t push yourself too hard, and focus on the much important tasks in hand.
lovinqfoxes chapter 1 . 3/19/2022
I love this story!
RozuFanfic1212 chapter 16 . 12/9/2021
Damn. I read this dozen of times (when I didn’t have an account) and It was one of the best sad rowdyruff fanfic I’ve ever read. Lmao, I even remember of how I got so pissed with the girls like damn, stop accusing the boys for stupid things they never did. Didn’t you actaully see how sick they were? Did you not acknowledge that? Aw, and the boys were getting attached to Ms. Bellum as if she is their mother. So cute. And the fact that Brick gets hella worried about Boomer’s concussion and he protects his brother at all costs. Even Butch.
howardrhonda828 chapter 10 . 8/27/2021
They're trying to do some slick stuff over at that CPS agency. Falsifying reports and getting things expedited before a full-scale investigation can even be launched. This chapter actually made me a bit mad because it has so much reality in it. CPS can be a very dubious agency, and that's putting it lightly. They don't have nearly as many checks and balances as it should and sometimes it even allows trafficking. It's just really evil and shady sometimes. Not all CPS agents are like this but some of them are.
technogeek29 chapter 16 . 5/26/2021
Whooooooo, found this today and was blasting through it at work today. thanks for the story I'm very much enjoying myself. cannot wait for the next one.
howardrhonda828 chapter 6 . 9/24/2020
Ms. Bellum being a social worker before makes a strange amount of sense. That just fits her perfectly somehow. And yeah, Brick has to be going through a crazy amount of stress not only being left behind by his parents but also having to share elbow room with his adversaries. I'm surprised he hasn't had a complete breakdown yet, because I certainly would.

Again, you bring attention to these things and don't gloss over or undermine them like other authors do. It's never an easy adjustment being taken from everything familiar to a new and unpredictable environment.

Also, what a way to build tension by creating a situation where both sides are out of the loop as far as relevant information. The girls still don't know the Professor has brought the RRBs to stay with them, but they THINK they have an understanding of the situation, putting the guy at ease until he casually blurts out one of their names and then the jig is up.

And now all hell is gonna break loose with Buttercup.
howardrhonda828 chapter 5 . 9/24/2020
See this fic gets that the Ruffs would not just automatically trust the Professor or their family unit just because they happened to get abandoned (forgotten) by their actual parents. They don't have a reason to trust the Utoniums; hell, the last time they were in that house, the boys were captured and trapped in a containment ray.

That's something I'm doing in my own story too. Not only are the boys wary and distrustful of ANY authority figure, the Professor or otherwise, but they have very good reason to be resentful towards the girls as well because of all their bad blood, and likewise on the other side. Both groups have done some really nasty things to each other and those differences must be resolved first before any form of peace or camaraderie can take place.
royalii chapter 16 . 8/16/2020
Cute
Rikoni chapter 16 . 7/24/2020
I love it
howardrhonda828 chapter 7 . 6/5/2020
Welp, that went EXACTLY as bad as I expected. And damn, while the boys had no powers either. Butch took one for the team, and Brick was being a very protective, worried brother too which I like. See, a lot of fanfictions try to vilify Butch and Brick, but for all that they tease Boomer, they DO care about him. Otherwise they'd just leave him, right? But no, they always stick together.
howardrhonda828 chapter 4 . 6/5/2020
You have a real talent for writing the Ruffs. They have their quarrels, hitting on each other, and teasing each other, but always stick together at the end of the day, and as usual, Boomer is absolutely adorable with his overactive morbid imagination. He's not unlike Bubbles in that regard.

I like how Ms. Bellum doesn't bat an eye at them being villains and treats them like the children that they are, despite their destructive powers.
howardrhonda828 chapter 2 . 5/21/2020
Boomer is super cute in this. Arguing that they weren't going to eat their burgers fast when the girl say, "Not so fast, Rowdyruff Boys!"
Brick using his illness to his advantage by hacking a loogie at the girls was super in-character. The Ruffs are gross!
YES! The way everybody reacts differently and realistically at the prospect of taking care of the Ruffs. The police can only see them as troublemakers and just want the brats out of their hair. Ms. Bellum is more motherly, quite keen on defending the children and seeing to it that their needs are properly met. And Professor Utonium just keeps seeing his daughters in those muddy, feverish faces, oh, bless his heart!
It was also a very good point that Utonium brought up about the girls being just as destructive as the boys in the movie and having to learn right from wrong. Let's not also forget that the Professor himself was a bit of a "Ruff" as a child, especially in school, goofing off and being disruptive. So I feel like he would be able to relate to the boys.
howardrhonda828 chapter 1 . 5/21/2020
So Mojo forgot the boys and they're locked out of the observatory. And they can't go to Him's because he's on vacation. But in the series, didn't they take over Fuzzy's home? That was in Bubble Boy.

It's noteworthy that the Ruffs are kind of in a Gangrene Gang predicament, where they are essentially homeless and pretty much have to crash in whatever's available. For the gang, that's the local dump. And the boys, at least in this story, are forced to take shelter under Mojo's place during a thunderstorm.
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