|Reviews for If you want to act more like an adult|
| DragonHalf chapter 1 . 3/1
awww, so cute
| ashlight41 chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
nice one I'm sure gintoki will be have hard life specialy with baldy hahahaha kept it I love gin kagura romance
| AsikIkisa chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
I still haven't reviewed this?
Well, this is a great story. Well written and the motivations and feelings are described beautifully and convincing.
Actually this story made me ship Ginkagu, so this really is something.
I reread it when I have a wish for a great Ginkagu fic, so... it's my favorite.
And it's so amazing that I don't know what to say more without repeating myself.
| kirausa chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
I would never know and could never now how you managed to write such an awesome GinKagu fic with 8,754 words, because writing a 1k words only story had already given me breathing difficulties XD
Such a sweet story with romantic plot line developments and cute moments, especially when Kagura tried to convince Gintoki to have her as his wife 3 *faints of cuteness* This is a perfect, well written story for GinKagu fans! Really love this story!
| Killthief99 chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Well now it seems like it's going to be very difficult for me to be an adult. Very funny, I liked it.
| kawaii chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
Es genial, Vivan Gintoki y Kagura
| Rei-chu Asakura chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
Kyaaaaa! I love this! :D really! n.n
the funny things are there (like the corn cob man covered with yam jelly), making me grin or chuckle that i want to note down a comment on them for the review to tell you how i liked them, but i just couldn't interrupt myself from reading XD and there was also suspense that i could really feel the tension-filled atmosphere when you're around the seriously angry-slash-worried Gintoki, and of course there was the oh-so-adorable GinxKagura goodness XD
i also like the olderguy-youngergirl kind of pairing, and Gin and Kagura just have some sort of chemistry that makes me want to ship them more than OkiKagu right now _ or maybe that's just for right now- oh i remember, GinxKagura was originally the pair i wanted when i first watched Gintama, now my problem in OTP is solved! XD thank you for letting me realize it XD oops, i'm being a chatterbox, sorry XD
Anyway, i really enjoyed this fic n_n i enjoyed it so much that i was feeling kinda sad when i was sensing that the ending was coming closer.. But i was glad that it didn't end where i thought it would (when Gin pinned her down) XD i'm glad there was still a conversation between them...and that Umibouzu will most likely come visit and chop Gin's head off XD (sadistic much?) XD
I like Gin and Kagura's conversation at the end, they were already being possessive and were stating their restrictions ;)) and Gin-chan's a pervert! XD hahaha XD
oh, and here's "The Nicest Man Alive Award" for you, Gin-chan! XD your patience is exceptional! XD
I think you got them in character well! :D especially Kagura :) she had her violent-er, fighter side yet she still does cute stuff like imitating what she sees in tv and enjoying the watering task too much, and she's still naive and gullible, big time XD
I totally agree with what Gintoki realized while on the train - he needed her. Without Kagura around, there's no one to back him up with his gags and cosplays and rowdiness.. Doing odd/weird jobs wouldn't be fun if there's no one to play around with XD
Kyaaaa all in all, i love this fic! n.n for this to be your first Gintama fic even though you ship OkiKagu, wow! o and i like you're long version of the title, it has Gintama's title style on it XD
| OBSERVER01 chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
pretty it up
| indefinitelyhigh chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
Ahaha. I loved this :)
| Reji Neguro chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
nice fic! i love Gin/Kagu... you should do a lemon of this fic XD!... yeah, I am a perv -_-U
| montycrowley chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
This is fantastic. No, REALLY. IT IS. One of the best written Gintama fics on this site (and I'm proud that it's a GinKagu one)! :D I loved the detailed story-telling in this, all the way down to the resolution. The characterization, especially for a parody anime like Gintama, where the characters are wacky and sometimes inconsistent, was very well-done. This was a joy to read! I hope you write more. :)
| some1ders13 chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
Great short story. It kept my interest and none of the characters were OC. Kagura's reactions to the men in the club were pretty funny, and I could totally picture her doing that to them. Also had a very good ending; kept it romantic without being corny. Awesome job!
| krishna chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
this is an awesome story! i love it and the charecters weren't too ou to f context. its realy great and plz keep up th egood work! : )
| mango-passion-live chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
AW! me love! please write more for gintama - and maybe some okikagu? although this pairing makes me happy as well. loved it - brilliant!
| Death God Raven chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
hey is awesome congartulations