|Reviews for Proof|
| jk chapter 1 . 7/10
the premise is a bit retarded don't you think? Edward thinks the way to show love is sex? HAHAHAHAHA
| Jazmin THE SPUFFY lover chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
i guess it would have been better if it was in new moon but then some kids wouldnt be able to see it and that would just be messed up to the mini twihards right?
| LoveAngel91 chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
its reaally good. i love it.
| emovampyreseer chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
Love Love Love It!
| 4kitty101 chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
| Suzy Q Something chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
i wish new moon had that, damn!
| katiecullen01 chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
really good. and I agree with you, that would of made it perfect. haha
| Walker77 chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
that would have made new moon perfect, i agree she should of added something more to the book, mayabe not a full blown lemon but something!
| MaeCullen17 chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
OH...I believe that would have made New Moon my favorite book!:)Great story!
| CheapMonday chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
That was awesome :O
You and Stephenie should team up, and you'd be responsible for the steamy parts ;)
But then again, younger fanpires shouldn't read it, so I suggest that you talk to Stephenie and start over with a version of the Twilight Saga, with somewhat mature content :p
Okay I'll stop babbling now :D
| Sherry80 chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I really enjoyed that story Have you ever thought of doing their honeymoon (Curious)
| Im Poiosned chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
cool one shot loved it lol :)
| Hikari102490 chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
i liked it and i agree! the perfect ending for new moon...
| twilightnaley19 chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
i liked it, awesome job on this.
| Cheekyy.Kikii chapter 1 . 5/15/2009