Reviews for Toshiro's Moon and Momo's Sun Comes One
queen.destroyah chapter 4 . 11/14/2014
More!
sexy chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
Dirty minded that how it should be
Eva chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
I love the way you write! And not only becse of the dirty parts ;)
rose chapter 4 . 1/20/2013
please finsh the story.
saxophone chapter 5 . 10/20/2012
it good your not abandoning this story.:)
xxMikanxNatsumeXMomoxToshiroxx chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
In-case you didn't know it's captain not caption anyway great story! :D
Shinjisgirl chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Make the language of the lemon a tad more classy. For instance, can you think of better words than "cum," "clit," and "jack off?" Make it more romantic and less like porn. And then there's the obvious grammar/spelling stuff.
1 gaara fan girl chapter 4 . 1/2/2012
THIS ONE!
euphemia li britannia chapter 4 . 1/2/2012
OMG!

This is really a gooooooood story!

Zero the winter God your a TENSAI!

SWEAR!

Pls, finish it...
Miss Tazzy chapter 2 . 12/26/2011
O_O Dang... 5 hours? O.o'''' Shiro-chan was horny... update soon x3
southern biotch chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
good story,...but the titles a little .
Chichi4mangaHero chapter 2 . 9/22/2011
awsome .
Rawr chapter 4 . 9/17/2011
Finish this story please. :( you write really awesome lemons and allow the advancement of the hinahitsu community! I enjoy reading this. Update soon plz.
Lolita7774 chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
oooo, that was sexy. when you find enough time, please do more!
Lolita7774 chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
now i want some sex lol. AND IM 12! you my friend are great at writing this stuuf!
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