Reviews for Toshiro's Moon and Momo's Sun Comes One
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2017
Wait how did he "shoot" onto the ROOF? BOI THATS FAR
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2017
Toshiro and Momo... were probably both making sounds while they were sleeping... Rangiku might not even have to walk in
toshiroxmomo122 chapter 1 . 7/17/2015
I saw the words "lemon in every chapter" and "Toshiro and Momo" and immediately I was like "oh shit I hit a gold mine" XD great Job. Love it.
queen.destroyah chapter 4 . 11/14/2014
sexy chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
Dirty minded that how it should be
Eva chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
I love the way you write! And not only becse of the dirty parts ;)
rose chapter 4 . 1/20/2013
please finsh the story.
saxophone chapter 5 . 10/20/2012
it good your not abandoning this story.:)
xxMikanxNatsumeXMomoxToshiroxx chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
In-case you didn't know it's captain not caption anyway great story! :D
Shinjisgirl chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Make the language of the lemon a tad more classy. For instance, can you think of better words than "cum," "clit," and "jack off?" Make it more romantic and less like porn. And then there's the obvious grammar/spelling stuff.
1 gaara fan girl chapter 4 . 1/2/2012
euphemia li britannia chapter 4 . 1/2/2012

This is really a gooooooood story!

Zero the winter God your a TENSAI!


Pls, finish it...
Miss Tazzy chapter 2 . 12/26/2011
O_O Dang... 5 hours? O.o'''' Shiro-chan was horny... update soon x3
southern biotch chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
good story,...but the titles a little .
Chichi4mangaHero chapter 2 . 9/22/2011
awsome .
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