|Reviews for The Art of Gravitation|
| twilightrocks100 chapter 12 . 9/28/2013
It was nice had a nice ring to it and I could see a lot this going on. Like the dressing up again I could totally see it. I mean that period is so Shuichi like. I love the idea as well.
| Shadow Kitsune67 chapter 12 . 12/17/2011
Hehe. Unlikely they may be but still like it when Tohma is nice to Shu in fanfiction *w*. Especially when they're paired up. Nice job c: Loved this fic :D
| angelicwarriorsaveshizumi78900 chapter 8 . 8/26/2010
| angelicwarriorsaveshizumi78900 chapter 2 . 8/26/2010
wow wow wow
| Be one with Mother Russia chapter 12 . 5/4/2010
(couldn't come up with something sarcastic, funny, or whitty)
| Proof of Nothing chapter 12 . 4/24/2010
Wow! This story is a definite favorite. :)
| Twombie Awdur chapter 12 . 7/22/2009
This was an excellent story and I really enjoyed reading it.
You are a very good writer and should continue to write, I'd love to see a sequel to this story if there isn't one already.
Well done I give you my Sian rating of * * * * /5
Have an awesome day
| Dragonfly-Moonlight chapter 12 . 6/16/2009
I've read this whole thing . . . and, while the plot seemed interesting enough and your grammar was acceptable, the last two chapters ruined the whole story for me. You could have been more original in how Tohma told Shuichi of what happened and how he handled the whole "Is it because I'm a guy" thing. As someone who has read the manga repeated and recently, I can see the blatant rip, and it's not even interesting. And I don't think Tohma would behave exactly or even eerily like Eiri. That's just not his character.
However, it's your story. Do with it as you see fit. What I've said is more or less my personal opinion.
I do love the pairing, though. Tohma's such an adorably smug bastard.
| soulseekerk9 chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
What a Great story, many thanks for writing it. It proves that YOU can put two characters to gether and make it work, I'm really glad I got you to write this fic keep up the great work.
| rowen raven chapter 12 . 5/21/2009
*Laugh* well done, i loved it, humn, who knew this pairings actually work, i like it, you always manage to keep them all in character, you are awesome. I know you just this wonderful story, but since you know me, and you know the sappy bastard i am i'm gonna be annoyingly selfish again and request a that you write a erie/suguru, some thing like their side of this story how they ended up together here, or something else, i dunno, you are the magical word weaver, so surprise me. again you did great here. *wink* thanks.
| Shadow of a Fallen Angel chapter 12 . 5/17/2009
i liked the end...
it was kinda nice and i really am trying hard to see shuichi in mikas clothes but it just isnt coming to me...
i just keep seeing the bitch queen herself...
| Shadow of a Fallen Angel chapter 11 . 5/17/2009
The scene we've been dying for...and i frikking love it to death!
That was so awesome and intense...i can tell you were really focusing on that one...
Well done Aki...
| Shadow of a Fallen Angel chapter 10 . 5/16/2009
Youre doing this just to annoy me right?
Making me wait for my lemony goodness?
I WANT MY LEMONY GOODNESS!
All in good time, all in good time...
Well, i guess i'll be waiting for the next chapter, whenever it doth come...
It wsa pretty sweet, and very reminiscent of an episode of gravitation...scept cooler
| Shadow of a Fallen Angel chapter 9 . 5/16/2009
FINALLY SOME ACTION!
Finally finally finally...!
now for more action...oh tohma is just perfect *squeezes ryus brains out ina a squish hug cause that story was so awesome*
| Shadow of a Fallen Angel chapter 8 . 5/16/2009
I thought you said there'd be limey goodness *poutyface*
oh well...i guess i'll just have to be waitifying for the next chapter