Reviews for The Forms of Deception
Kilasfd chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Great story! I love how you were able to show some of the actual moments in the series while also making it sound like a continuous piece of writing.

Keep up the great work!
koa-chan chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Just beautiful. I love how you delved deeper in their moments in the series, with sure pretty and surreal moods and words at that.

Thanks for the nice read.
Toph the Trickster chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
the story was cute, well written, insightful, slightly angsty, but cute.

you managed to make your narration something akin to a third-person, omnipresent type. It was like the narrator was actually there when the events transpired.

Keep it up,

Yoph the Trickster