Reviews for Holding Her Own
girlX901 chapter 3 . 7/1/2009
AHH i love it please update soon or i will cry. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please and PLEASE
Nightraze chapter 3 . 5/24/2009
This is awesome. Update ASAP.
strawberry.fishcakes chapter 3 . 5/24/2009
umm... sorry to say this but, umm...

i don't get it

:(
Yemi Hikari chapter 3 . 5/23/2009
Except the words in the first chapter are still confusing. If Karin was never put back into her body, then one of them had to be left behind with the hollow, either her spirit form, or her physical body... as Matsumoto can't carry both. That was rather my point with what I said in my previous reviews. It is a matter of wording really...
Lillix Vail chapter 2 . 5/22/2009
Write the story how you want, don't let other people tell you what to do. )

Though a bit longer chapters and more description of what's happening would probably help your readers understand more about what's happening. )

Good introduction though. ;-D
Yemi Hikari chapter 2 . 5/22/2009
Yeah... Matsumoto would have defeated the hollow and called for help, not leaving Karin's real body behind... but this can be rewritten a bit if one so chooses...
Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Actually, she would have defeated the Hollow first then called for help, not leaving Karin's body behind for it to be possibly mangled by the hollow or picked up by the medics...
HeraldHealer chapter 2 . 5/22/2009
I like it, although it is a bit short.
who knows chapter 2 . 5/22/2009
interesting

i'll be lookin forward 2 ur updates!
strawberry.fishcakes chapter 2 . 5/21/2009
yay!
strawberry.fishcakes chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
nice

i'll be patient but just..

well..

update.