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JennyJethro4ever chapter 3 . 12/18/2013
Please continue!
Left my heart in Paris chapter 3 . 10/19/2011
I just found this and loved it. Jen sending cynthia to find him lol. I would love to read more
Viktorija chapter 3 . 10/30/2009
lol,well done!:))
quibilah chapter 3 . 10/12/2009
I really liked it, great job. Can't wait to read other stories.
Ab55556 chapter 3 . 6/5/2009
omigoshh! this made me laugh SO much! you have to ud!

the conversation is absolutely hilarious!

LavenderLimmerick chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
This chapter most definetly made me smile and just so you know, I love cheesiness. I live for it :) Cant wait for more!
CheerChickx chapter 3 . 5/27/2009
Classic convo with Ziva/Tony/McGee.

Loved how you wrote:

“Yes. Oh, we are too good.”

It just says it all.

It's great how Gibbs was listening in. Funny!

journalofcrime chapter 3 . 5/27/2009
i do love when you do jenny's thoughts, "“Crap…” Jenny thought, “Is it that obvious?”"


yes-no, ziva-mcgee-tony bit is awesome, classic ncis
MissJayne chapter 3 . 5/27/2009
Loved it! Of course Tony and Ziva would make that guess... hehe
Pandora of Ithilien chapter 3 . 5/26/2009
tony will never learn... and mcgee needs stealth gossip lessons. i wonder what gibbs will do to them as punishment for being nosy. because he has to be planning something.
Bamacrush chapter 3 . 5/26/2009
i love this, especially the sneaking around like teenagers. Please update soon.
Bluemoon909 chapter 3 . 5/26/2009
i liked it cant wait to see what happens next
OutCold chapter 3 . 5/26/2009
Fantastic! Great Tony/Ziva yes/no conversation, with some classic McGee and brilliant closing.
ParisNeverEnded chapter 3 . 5/26/2009
Im loving it TOTALLY!this is soo cool!:)i can just immagine a little baby girl the next time and lidle DiNozzo changing her diaper...hah...Anyway back to reality i loved that:)
TomorrowNeverCame chapter 3 . 5/26/2009
That was hilarious! Especially how McGeek had no clue what they were saying. You might want to check the second to last line, a few extra words. :)

Please continue soon :D

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