Reviews for It Was Real
IAMNOTAHAM chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
I liked it, good story~!
InsanityGoneMad chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
That was brilliant! That's really all I can say about it! You both did really really well.

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Ab55556 chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
love the ending! really great.

the whole story is very enjoyable to read, and if that is how you write when you are rushed, i cant wait to see how you write when you are not!

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Verdad-y-Vida chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
Nice! I'm a technically a Tiva fan, but I think Tony's relationship with Jeanne was incredibly sad for the both of them (Tony and Jeanne) and also immeasurably important to Tony's growth, so I like Tony/Jeanne plotlines. And they're a rarity. Thanks for sharing!

I will say that I think Tony saying "no" was very deliberate, because he saw—rightly, I think—that there was too much water under the bridge. He took Ziva's advice, best he could—"tell her what she needs to hear". I'm sure his answer would have been different if Jeanne had not accused him of murder, but as it was I think he realized they wouldn't be able to ever fully get past their many issues. He'd lied to her, she'd asked him to leave NCIS and then accused him of a murder he didn't commit. They weren't going to get past that. So he told her what he hoped she needed to move on. Anyway, just my take on it, but I loved reading a happy (if angsty!) ending in your story!
YouGottaSingAlong chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
I'm doing it, no need to be so impatient.

Awesome as per usual. I love the meeting Jeanne part, and Paula's Grace Period line.

Let me guess, Doug put in the "yes, yes, yes, f*uck it, yes* line.
CheerChickx chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
That was brilliant you guys! :)

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OutCold chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Thank you thank you thank you! You guys are brilliant and I love you both. And thank you thank you thank you. And it was fantastic. The way everything seems to remind him of her is perfection.

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Tiva4evaxxx chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
That was great!

Fantastic writing - both of you!

Well done :-)

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