|Reviews for New Beginnings|
| angellwings chapter 23 . 4/14
Okay so I see that this hasn't been updated in years but I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story! I love your Dinah/Ollie/Bruce story line and your inclusion of Ted Grant! I also love that you kept Davis. That moment Davis killed Jimmy is really where Smallville started to go all wrong for me so correcting that was brilliant! I really love what you've done with this story so far! Great work! Maybe someday you'll finish it, but if not I enjoyed what you did finish!
| OllielovesDinah chapter 23 . 10/4/2014
I've been working lots and as a reward to myself I decided to come on here today to re-read my favorite Dollie and fics with Dollie in them and ofcourse while on this site you are primarily Chlavis I also consider you a Dollie author like BeverlyQueen and "thewomanwhosoldtheworld" and Angellwings so I re-read everybody today. I do miss this story and I do understand if you are not continuing and also that you've removed the Dollie one-shot and the fics on the Arrow site. I completely understand and while I will NOT be watching the lie that will be this season's Arrow albeit keeping a close but from afar eye on Laurel's progression but not nowhere near for Oliver. This show has made this Green Arrow unlikeable to me and you know I love Green Arrow! I even liked the wreck of the Ollie on Smallville that is until the thing with Chloe ofcourse. I loved your Ollie in this fic and the others so I wanted to visit. I still follow the Arrow fanfiction for the few Laurivers there and I wanted to tell you about Gotham, the new show. Maybe the potential is greater there because it is not the CW and it was authors like you that got me a little interested in Batman, a little. I remember that Bruce and Laurel fic you were working on on Arrow and even though I was secretly rooting for Ollie in that fic I was following it. I watched the first 2 episodes of Gotham and I am already hooked. This Bruce is very innocent and I see the beginning of his transformation and I am intrigued. But what really reeled me in are the rest of the characters that are indirectly and in its future directly connected to our Dinah. Gotham is her home after all but before her and batgirl there was Jim Gordon and Bullock and I am hoping one day a Dinah Drake and a Larry Lance. I am excited for this new show and I wanted to let my favorite fanfiction authors know. Maybe a new venue I am blatantly throwing your way...just saying. In the meantime I plan on stopping by and re-reading this fic for as long as it is here.
| Destny Changer chapter 23 . 10/13/2013
Hello again. I just came back to ask you if you could continue "Crossroads of the Heart"? I read it a very long while back but had no idea you were also the one who wrote "The Bat and the Canary". Finding out today that you were the same author for both stories surprised me. I'm asking you to continue because I just came back across it today and now I'm wanting to see who Caspian chooses. And I want to know why Aslan sent Peter to Narnia in your story. I had forgotten about that story since checking it out,but seeing the story again in your profile brought it back to my memory. Please change your mind and write more of it. Plase dont delete it. Have a very good life.
| Destiny Changer chapter 23 . 10/13/2013
I personally disagree with your decision to cancel "The Bat and the Canary",and I really wish that you had at least written an ending instead of a cliffhanger,but if that is what you feel you have to do,then okay. Please remember that fanfiction has no bearing on actual canon(some star wars stories have Obi-Wan as a woman) and Laurel WILL be the Black Canary. I am dissapointed,but I will try to accept your decision. If you do write a another story about Laurel's journey depending on where the show goes,could you please add Batman in it in order to to make dissapointed reaers like me feel better? That's all I have have to say about this and good blessings on your other stories. By the way,you should check out the Star Wars fanfic "Knight Of the Force". It's very epic. And I also reccommed the new CW drama,"tommorow people" if you havn't watched it. Have a very good day.
| darkassassin224 chapter 7 . 2/13/2013
Liked the Crashtones reference!
Was actually listening to that song when you had Davis singing it to Chloe it's such a nice song!
Brilliant story mich better than the show!
| darkassassin224 chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Just read chapter one and am already thinking it was ten times bette than what they did in the show!
Hell yeah Davis Bloome!
| Storybreaker chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
[OllielovesDinah 10/2/12 . chapter 21
I liked the trip down memory lane for Dinah and Bruce, especially since it's in the past, and Dinah's sweet reference to Ollie. I haven't kept count of how many fanfiction stories of this particular triangle I've found over the 2 years I've followed fanfiction where the Green Arrow always lost out to the true love of Bats/Canary. It seems to be gospel that if you are ever paired with Batman then there is no other. Look at all the BM/WW stories out there compare to Smallville's SM/LL. Like these are the only possible soulmate pairs out there. I will always ship my beloved ship, Dollie, even if canon and Smallville has doomed them to extinction. That's why I love authors like you, and Beverly Queen, and thewomanwhosoldtheworld, and Angellwings, Olansamuelle, and any other Dollie fanfiction author I left out and all my old comics with them, never the New52, to make the pain go away. And even if in canon they had as much downs as ups, there was never any doubt that they are each other's true loves. That's what I get from your story.]
| skye718 chapter 23 . 10/27/2012
Sorry to forget to log I made that Helena and Dollie comment. Great chapter.
| Guest chapter 23 . 10/27/2012
So happy you have Huntress in here. And although I love this Dollie, I'm glad she set him straight. But two loving *backheadslaps* would have worked just fine ;)
| Jeremy Shane chapter 23 . 10/27/2012
Super Chapter & More Please
| OllielovesDinah chapter 23 . 10/26/2012
Awesome chapter. I certainly got my Dollie fix today. I can understand Ollie's frustration but Dinah's sort of ultimatum trumped it. They desperately want each other and it's their own personal kryptonite. The love is there, Dinah is right, they need to get the trust on board now. Thanks for the fast update!
| OllielovesDollie chapter 22 . 10/21/2012
I'm actually getting into Chlavis, is it a miracle? No, u r a good writer, but ofcourse still missing Dollie.
| DollieFanDC chapter 22 . 10/18/2012
Great chapter, but I can't wait for more Dollie in the next chapter!
| Jeremy Shane chapter 22 . 10/16/2012
Super Chapter & More Please
| skye718 chapter 22 . 10/15/2012
Chlavis humour and ganging up on Clark is always a win. I was cracking up so much until you decided to end Chlavis with sexxxxx. Btw, isn't that how all Chlavis fics go. (Sorry I'm a perv). Great job *cold shower*