Reviews for First 'real' Kiss
Leon Midnight chapter 1 . 11/30/2016
Gotta love those Naru-bashing stories! - A lovely little story. Too bad it's so short. And an unexpected and unusual couple, yet lovable all the same! I was always of the belief that, as long as there is TRUE love between people, then wether they are related by blood or not is irrelevant. Things like being siblings, mother and daughter, mother and son, father and daughter, father and son, etc... matters NOTHING in the face of TRUE love!
AlexCephon chapter 1 . 8/22/2016
Thank you for this mastery of words.
Jace-literaryadept chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
he he

NICE
The foxxx chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
ther r not enuf of thes stories
major wallace chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
nice
MaceEcam chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Ah yes, my favorite girl to pair Kei with, after Shinobu and before Kitsune. A very good story indeed.
Twisteddarkness225 chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
very nice. loved it.
Diamondokami chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
That was a cute little one shot. Though I am not a big Haruka/Keitaro fan I did like the though process of Haruka over the whole one shot.
OrionPax09 chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
A very cute little story. Personally, I've always felt Haruka would be good for Keitaro if weren't for the business of her being his aunt.

While Keitaro/Shinobu is my favorite Love Hina pairing, this story is a good one.

As for Naru, she is a true sociopath. I truly loved it when Haruka sent her skyward, for once!
Doctor-T chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
Very good. There's also room here for a second chapter, if you were so minded. Granny must have had a reason for Haruka not being allowed to kick Naru out previously. I'd be interested to see if the love between Keitaro and Haruka could survive Granny finding out what has just happened - both with them getting together, and Naru being a splatter-effect on the remains of the door.

Nice touch with the hole at the end.
glAssbOy chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Steamy...

Cheers!
Wittmann the Tiger Ace chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
after shinobu, my second favorite pairing. good story.
Bob chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Can you make a story with this pairing instead of a ones hot i love the oneshot but i think you should check it over it repeats somewhere in their
alone shadow dream chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
good story
Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! First review, btches!

Now, THIS...was...AW3SOME!

Incest FTFW! LOL

Oh, and Naru-Bashing FTW, too! LMAO

Very sweet and fluffy piece of work, marine.

Nice work!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!