Reviews for Counting Days
Twinnet chapter 26 . 7/29/2010
Haha, go Tifa!
Qwi-Xux chapter 26 . 10/13/2009
AW! I'm sorry I got so behind on this-you kept updating like crazy and I was sick and not focusing on much. SO SWEET! I loved the last few. The helmet one made me giggle, and the one where they were having a nice outing was beautiful, and this ;)

And YAY! Congrats on making it past the halfway mark! :D
gingerbreadbear chapter 26 . 10/10/2009
Yes! Another quick update! :P

Great job with this one. It kept me on edge all the way up to the end! I love how you wrote the fight scene. Very intense. _

And I think although Cloud might be able to hold up on his own without a sword, Tifa would school him in hand-to-hand combat anyday! (But kissing her? That's just cheating! :D)

~ gingerbreadbear
drbls chapter 26 . 10/10/2009
Cloud should have rudimentary knowledge of hand-to-hand combat and if this were a bare fist fight (without materia, gloves, and etc), I think Cloud would have the upper hand based on his mako enhanced strength and quickness. Tifa has a slim chance of winning if she can stay on the defensive and use grappling techniques (not by throwing him at such ridiculous distances as other stories portray). I don't know why other authors make the wild claim that she's a master martial artist just because she practiced for eight years; she would have to attain that status in her forties. It's hard to judge who can win since their feats in the game (as stated by other gamers) are almost comparable.
mom calling chapter 26 . 10/10/2009
They must have taught hand-to-hand in the Shinra Academy, same as the taught rifles. The big knife stuff would have been in addition to and after the mastery of the other elements of battle. And I can't imagine Cloud not being at least adequate to spar with Tifa; it's in so many of the fanfic stories that it's almost canon. I think it's Cloud who first plays dirty. He's the one who interjects kissing into their martial arts exercise... that's probably not taught at the Academy! I guess in this case, no one looses! Especially us, thanks to you, . thx mc
gingerbreadbear chapter 25 . 10/9/2009
Kyaa! This was so sweet. It made me feel all mushy inside (in a good way). :)

"If he remembers, he must thank Yuffie for the sign."

- Oh! The sign! Yes, Cloud finally used it. _

And the last line... *dies from the cuteness*

Awesome job. Extra brownie points for the fast update~!

~ gingerbreadbear
mom calling chapter 25 . 10/9/2009
Procrastination is when we think our deepest thoughts, no?

And there don't have to be any birds around to hear what they say... It's all about love one way or 'tother. But Cloud's like a lot of us-it's hours later that the perfect smart reply, the understanding of a sly comment hits us 'longside the head. No birds, huh? Well, it wasn't about the birds, anyway. Not those kinds of birds... Thanks for this. mc
gingerbreadbear chapter 24 . 10/8/2009
Oh, what? xD *laughs maniacally*

I was so not expecting that. (And I don't think it is possible for Cloud to wear a helmet! His hair is WAY too spiky; but that's the way everybody likes it)

I loved this bit:

"“Do you.. need anything? I heard from Shera, Cid has the same problems sometimes.”"

*laughs again*

Awesome job. You made my day. :)

~ gingerbreadbear
mom calling chapter 24 . 10/7/2009
Why doesn't Cloud wear a helmet? I think it's neither vanity (well, maybe just a bit) nor impossible-due-to-extreme-hair (well, maybe just a bit, especially the 'hat-hair' upon removal). I think it's mountain stubborness. Cloud doesn't like to HAVE to do things. How funny that he got busted! I bet he wasn't going to tell Tifa, either. Oh, this is a good 'un, Drink Juice. Mighty good! Thanks for the laugh at our hero's expense. mc
AquariumJello chapter 24 . 10/7/2009
A giggle and smile-worthy chapter. :) I was wondering when Cloud would be fined; everything about him and his motorcycle is so against the law!

Nice to hear that you haven't disappeared, by the way. (;
VanillaCookiesxD chapter 23 . 9/17/2009
hey! It's been a while since you last updated! This was awesome lol. I liked their voice messages xD So cute. I wonder where the family is x3.
Qwi-Xux chapter 23 . 9/14/2009
I wonder if is backed up on messages again; I never got an email saying this was updated. I'll probably get it tomorrow or something. *rolls eyes*

This was really cute. :D The way they left their answering machine was great. _
AquariumJello chapter 23 . 9/14/2009
Honestly, I don't think I have ever laughed as hard as I did when I imagined Cloud calling himself a chocobo.

Sometimes, these tiny little drabbles are the best way to brighten a reader's day. It worked on me. Great job! :)
kitsune13 chapter 23 . 9/13/2009
short, sweet, and freaking a-dorable! You've caught a healing family without them even being in the room. Beautiful job. Absolutely beautiful.
mom calling chapter 23 . 9/13/2009
?Diesel? ?Chocobo? Things have gotten homey-relaxed! And getting dental reminders is about as "family" as it gets. Good to hear from you, though you couldn't stay long... mc
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