|Reviews for Smitten and Red|
| AmbersAndEmeralds chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
Aww! It's so cute /
Love it! XD 3 3
How about a POV of Ruka and Hotaru, too? That'd be really cute :3
Just a suggestion though, haha :)
| Leafless chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
| Wisteria.Sinensis chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Oh, nice fic, very awesome indeed.
| blah chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
it's good. love the plot, description and everything about it. is ruka a bit ooc, though?
| Devine Inspiration chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
| Natsumi Imai chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
Wow I loved it! really good
| Skai Valentine chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Awesome story! Totally sweet! Great job, please keep on writing Fanfics!
| chayoni chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
| mangagirl214 chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
hehe. :D it was really cute. :]
| karupin022 chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
that's so nice
hope to read more!
| xoRawrox chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I couldn't help but to think that Mikan will be like " Me wuv chu too!" Or something babyish like that.. xD
| chrisca123456789 chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
| ichigo-kitten chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Nice story! I wish natsume didn't have to leave mikan though. But anyway, it was greAT! ;D
| loveddd itttt chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
THIS WAS AWESOME DUDE I COMPLETELY LOVED ITT GREAT ONE-SHOT X
| EzMouse chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Aw. I thought that was really cute. :)
I'm not really the type of person who's fond
of reading oneshots but I can make an exception
when something interesting catches my attention.
There were very few minor errors but they were
easy to brush off. Overall, the story was short,
yet very cute.
This is the line that I somehow liked the most:
“Maybe…preoccupied…those blue eyes.”
I dunno. It's just so "kyaa" to me. Haha. XD
And I'm a huge fan of Taylor Swift and her songs.
White Horse is one of my faves and I kinda hoped
that Mikan got a chance to sing it for Ruka before
she really left him, though. I mean, of course he
doesn't even know the tune of the song yet. But
it's fine. Leave it to your readers' imagination. ;)
Good job on this. More luck to your stories.