Reviews for Smitten and Red
AmbersAndEmeralds chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
Aww! It's so cute /
Love it! XD 3 3
How about a POV of Ruka and Hotaru, too? That'd be really cute :3
Just a suggestion though, haha :)
Leafless chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Sweet. :)
Wisteria.Sinensis chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Oh, nice fic, very awesome indeed.
blah chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
it's good. love the plot, description and everything about it. is ruka a bit ooc, though?
Devine Inspiration chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
that's cute!
Natsumi Imai chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
Wow I loved it! really good
Skai Valentine chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Awesome story! Totally sweet! Great job, please keep on writing Fanfics!
chayoni chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
mangagirl214 chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
hehe. :D it was really cute. :]
karupin022 chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
that's so nice

hope to read more!
xoRawrox chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I couldn't help but to think that Mikan will be like " Me wuv chu too!" Or something babyish like that.. xD
chrisca123456789 chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
nice!so good!
ichigo-kitten chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Nice story! I wish natsume didn't have to leave mikan though. But anyway, it was greAT! ;D
loveddd itttt chapter 1 . 5/16/2009

LOVE tobiiee
EzMouse chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Aw. I thought that was really cute. :)

I'm not really the type of person who's fond

of reading oneshots but I can make an exception

when something interesting catches my attention.

There were very few minor errors but they were

easy to brush off. Overall, the story was short,

yet very cute.

This is the line that I somehow liked the most:

“Maybe…preoccupied…those blue eyes.”

I dunno. It's just so "kyaa" to me. Haha. XD

And I'm a huge fan of Taylor Swift and her songs.

White Horse is one of my faves and I kinda hoped

that Mikan got a chance to sing it for Ruka before

she really left him, though. I mean, of course he

doesn't even know the tune of the song yet. But

it's fine. Leave it to your readers' imagination. ;)

Good job on this. More luck to your stories.


EzMouse. :D
18 | Page 1 2 Next »